"Better Than at the Other" (Sam/Dean slash)

[blueiris08]

Title: “Better Than at the Other”
Rating: NC-17 for consensual but intense sex.
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Word Count: 1800
Episode/Spoilers: “Heaven and Hell”
Summary: “Then do me instead,” Sam panted. His mind screamed at him not to hurt his brother even like this, but his body was screaming louder, so he shoved Sam onto his back and gave him what he wanted.

Comments

[hawk_sama]

That's was so intense, painful and beautiful. All the dispair in Dean, how Sam can't really understand him. How you compare all the situations, when Dean is doing Sam... the hell, vision, his work. All so damn wrong

Totally love it!

The end... I'm speechless.

[blueiris08]

I'm glad that the wrongness worked for you--there was no possible 'right' after that scene, but I didn't want it to be too wrong. Thanks for letting me know!

[applepie_x0]

awh. uhm. wow. <3 i agree with everything hawk_sama said. so intense, painful and beautiful.

xo <3

[blueiris08]

I'm glad you liked it!

[linda3m]

That was brilliantly conceived and executed - and disturbing as hell (pardon the expression).

[blueiris08]

That's what I was shooting for. Thanks!

loved it!

[keikokin]

sometimes you're damned if you do and damned if you don't. You do an excellent job showing the inner damnation and condemnation is sometimes enough to drive you insane despite the pleasure. Great piece!

Re: loved it!

[blueiris08]

You do an excellent job showing the inner damnation and condemnation is sometimes enough to drive you insane...
Exactly--Dean's out of hell, but that doesn't mean he escaped.

Thank you for commenting.

[gidgetgal9]

Wow, poor tortured Dean, this was intense - powerful and hot!

[blueiris08]

Thank you!