Comments | blueiris08: "What's Left to Lose"

blueiris08

"What's Left to Lose"

Sep 23, 2006 22:55

Rating: PG
Characters: John, Sam. Genfic-no slash.
Word Count: 950
Spoilers: This fic is written in the aftermath of “Devil’s Trap,” but contains no spoilers for the next season. ‘Cause I don’t know any.
Generic warning on all of my fics: A minority of my stories contain character death. For artistic reasons, I prefer not to disclose it in the ( Read more... )

gen, john pov, short, post-ep, john, sam

Comments 15

missyjack September 24 2006, 03:44:20 UTC

Wow, very intense. And I'd never thought about Dean's pleas in this way He was trying to save you from killing him.” but you are so right.

Can only hope the first ep of S2 is as satisfying and hurty as this!

Response blueiris08 September 24 2006, 11:57:04 UTC

Well, maybe not quite so hurty. But some intensity and John come-uppance would be welcome.

Thanks for commenting!

bbrownsugar September 24 2006, 15:14:10 UTC

Sam lowered his head again. “Yeah, he could beat them. If he fought.”

I would never picture Dean not fighting for survival, but it makes sense in this context. And it hurts.

Good job.

bluesister September 24 2006, 17:28:21 UTC

“You think he was afraid to die? Jesus, Dad.”

Nicely done, the whole thing.

anakin415 September 25 2006, 01:32:10 UTC

excelfuckinglent

I can honestly beleive that Dean didnt give a shit about dying he gave a shit about being there to protect Sam and Dad about being able to keep his place and continue his duty. When you are a soilder/warrior your concern isnt dying your concern is to fight another day.

loved this.

gwaevalarin September 25 2006, 15:50:18 UTC

That was very intense and sad.

Sam lowered his head again. "Yeah, he could beat them. If he fought."

That line broke my heart. Sam knows and understands Dean in a way no one, not even John ever will.