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yvonnegos June 17 2011, 16:17:32 UTC
This was so fricken gorgeous! I seriously love Jared's personality in this! ;D And this is really weird, but I really like how there was no sex written. They were a beautiful couple and I know it's obvious they DID have it, but it just didn't feel like a porn story and I love it! A timestamp however...*snickers and goes to make her own Jared*

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blueeyedliz June 19 2011, 20:39:47 UTC
\0/ I'm reallyyyyy thrilled you liked it.

And I'm so glad you mentioned the porn thing because I gave that issue a lot of thinky thoughts. I did actually write part of a sex scene but in the end it just didn't seem to fit...the story is simpler and I guess a little sweeter without the porn and I preferred it that way...But timestamp porn is FTW!

In fact there's is several missing scenes that I might have to post at some point, like Jared's time away from Jensen and how he came back to Texas - I wrote a whole scene where Chad visits him at the bar in San Antonio only for it to end up being cut out.

Thanks heaps for reading and commenting hon x

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yassharrar June 17 2011, 22:57:13 UTC
fantastic story loved it

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blueeyedliz June 19 2011, 20:40:18 UTC
Thanks so much!

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yohkobennington June 18 2011, 05:04:15 UTC
awesome :D

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blueeyedliz June 19 2011, 20:40:32 UTC
\0/ Thank you.

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reilaroo June 18 2011, 05:15:47 UTC
Oh, I love this so much. Weird Science was my favorite movie when I was a kid. I swear I watched it at least once a week. I had the song memorized. So, I was very excited to see a J2 version of the movie. Its so perfect. I loved Jensen, Jared, Chad, and Jensen's family. I really liked it when Jensen finally stood up to Tom. It was about time.

I'm really glad it had a happy ending. I was worried when Jared left and Jensen moved away for college. I was so happy when the boys found each other again. They belong together.

Wonderful story. Great job. I really enjoyed it.

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blueeyedliz June 19 2011, 20:41:57 UTC
I'm soooooo glad you liked the story especially since you love the movie. That's really awesome and such a relief because even though I changed a lot of the plotline, I still wanted to do the film justice. :)

Thanks heaps for reading & commenting.

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borgmama1of5 June 18 2011, 05:58:32 UTC
The part where they were apart made me tear up. Appreciated the happy ending!

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blueeyedliz June 19 2011, 20:42:09 UTC
Thank you. x

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