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J2 Fic. Bars At My Window 5/?

Nov 08, 2008 07:39

Title: Bars At My Window
Author: Blueeyedliz
Summary: Jared Padalecki, guilty of auto theft, is put away in San Quentin. Jensen Ackles takes it upon himself to instruct the younger man in the brutal protocol of San Quentin and the strategies essential for survival. A friendship born of mutual need ends up becoming much more and one thing they’ll ( Read more... )

bars, look ma i wrote j2

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devon99 November 9 2008, 16:37:26 UTC

Another great chapter Liz.
This is real emotional rollercoaster of a story.

Loved how Jared tried to distance himself from Jenson and that it hurt them both so much, but then the scary riot forced Jared to realise that he couldn't be without Jenson.

“Jen, I thought I could be here without being with you. I couldn’t have been more wrong.”

This line and the kiss just made me all melty...

Look forward to the next part:)

blueeyedliz November 9 2008, 20:35:48 UTC

Thanks for your support hun, I'm really glad you liked it. I'm doing some final tweaking but I'll have the next chapter posted in the morning. x

skagtrendy1 November 11 2008, 23:03:05 UTC

There's a riot goin' on...great stuff as always sweetheart. And that kiss....wow. Loved it. But the boys are separated again? Ah shit.

Nice one darlin.

Kind regards,
ST.xxx.

blueeyedliz November 12 2008, 06:18:14 UTC

: D Glad you liked the kiss, well, you know the saying about absence making the heart grow fonder...thanks a million for reading.