J2 Fic. Bars At My Window 5/?

[blueeyedliz]

Title: Bars At My Window
Author: Blueeyedliz
Summary: Jared Padalecki, guilty of auto theft, is put away in San Quentin. Jensen Ackles takes it upon himself to instruct the younger man in the brutal protocol of San Quentin and the strategies essential for survival. A friendship born of mutual need ends up becoming much more and one thing they’ll

Comments

[billysgirl5]

Even though it wan't you're favorite chapter, it was still really good. A necessary, filler chapter.

Even though I have no clue how you could pull it off, I'm hoping for a happy ending for Jared and Jensen.

[blueeyedliz]

; ) Glad you liked it. Thanks! I'm working on what I think will be the last chapter now and I'm seriously stuck on whether to end things in the same way the book ended or to change things round a little...

[all_feeling]

I'm glad the boys found a way to each other, even though it was a bit dangerous :) I hope they can figure out how to be together somehow.

Are you still planning this to ba a 7 parter? I mean, I'm so hooked, I wouldn't mind more chapters :D

[blueeyedliz]

It's wicked to hear that you're hooked. At the moment I'm writing Chapter 8 which is likely to be the last chapter...but it's the sort of story which might suit an epilogue to tie things up. I think I'll leave the decision about whether or not I should add an epilogue up to you guys when you've had chance to read Chapter 8.

Thanks so so much for reading. x

[yellowwolf5]

I can't believe I missed three chapters >_< But I'm all caught up now!
Poor boys.
I really liked this chapter!

[blueeyedliz]

Awww don't worry, RL is often hectic for me and I'm writing so much now that my reading is behind, in a big way.

Anyway I'm really glad you've caught up, thanks so much.

[gidgetgal9]

You so captured the brutality of prison life beautifully in this chapter so way to go. Poor guys - they make up only to be separated- can't wait for more! :0)

[blueeyedliz]

Cheers my dear x. Always wonderful to get feedback from a writer I admire.

[angels3]

I'm all caught up now. I'm all stressed out now too.

Jeesh it's just one thing after another with those two, and Jensen never getting out.

Kripke needs his ass reamed and this little riot here might just be the ticket to getting it done.

[blueeyedliz]

Awww sorry for the stress hun, this isn't an easy going story (especially with the subject matter concerned) and although the next chapter has some schmoop (\0/yay schmoop break), things will get hard for the boys again...

Thanks so much for reading. Ooh yes, and Warden Kripke is a hard-ass.