[Fic: Hockey RPS] Drag me Through this Orchestrated Mess (Final Revision); Edler/Seidenberg; PG-13

[blueabsinthe]

Last in revisions for Challenge #13. This is Challenge #13c, which asked for:

If you participated in Part 1 and Part 2, you now have a story less than 250 words. Your goal now is to pare it down so that your story is between 100-125 words

If you've read the original ( here), then feel free to skim over this one.

Drag me through this

Comments

[quenchmysoul]

I found it interesting to see how the revisions changed the fic.

[quenchmysoul]

I think I liked all three of the versions! But I like how simplistic the last version is :D