I loveee the third panel, especially with the vase/table falling down xD <33 You've gotten amazing at showing action and emotion! :3 I can't wait to see the next page(s)~
Tehehe, these pages made me giggle a bit - the dialogues work quite brilliantly. It does feel like the story is flowing, so don't worry about that xP I guess Luna's current clothing isn't as complex as Ten's - he's got belts, bandana and bags, whereas she's only got the simple shirt in most of her shots.
Haha, you're probably right about that. I noticed Seta got a bit easier to work with now that I don't have to draw that cannon and sword anymore, lol. Unfortunately, Ten rarely parts with the bag and bandanna >_>.
Comments 11
Reply
Reply
Reply
All I'll say is that she notices something about him and doesn't quite know what it is yet >:3.
Anyway, thanks so much :D.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
x3 - "His name is Ten" O__O
Tehehe, these pages made me giggle a bit - the dialogues work quite brilliantly. It does feel like the story is flowing, so don't worry about that xP I guess Luna's current clothing isn't as complex as Ten's - he's got belts, bandana and bags, whereas she's only got the simple shirt in most of her shots.
Reply
Then my job here is done XD.
Haha, you're probably right about that. I noticed Seta got a bit easier to work with now that I don't have to draw that cannon and sword anymore, lol. Unfortunately, Ten rarely parts with the bag and bandanna >_>.
Thanks very much :D.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment