You would not believe how annoying that one line was because of HP. In order to try and avoid it, I actually had a different line ("will my death hurt"), but had to toss it because really, who speaks like that? It also had to be a question instead of a statement in order to continue the father/son dynamic. Sam needs the Devil to comfort him and the Devil does. I also needed the reader to realize that Sam had been talking of his potential suicide at the beginning of the epilogue
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