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Red Is My Colour Prompt for Day Four

Jan 04, 2009 11:50

Title: Suzie Costello Has Two Daddies

Author: blue_fjords

Pairings/Characters: Suzie, slight Jack/Ianto

Setting: pre-series one

Word Count: roughly 1,750

Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Rating: PG

( Fic here! )

tw: jack/ianto, tw: suzie, red is my colour, fic

Comments 32

alba17 January 7 2009, 04:53:15 UTC

Really great story. And a funny title.

mylenn January 8 2009, 20:08:15 UTC

The whole team was great in this one! Jack's concern for Ianto was lovely, as was Suzie's interaction with them both.

blue_fjords January 9 2009, 05:45:33 UTC

Thanks! I hope to write more of Suzie later.

tiggerbrasilf January 8 2009, 21:06:42 UTC

This is really cool (: I have one word for Suzi (well 2!) rifle mittens, they are fantastic (:

blue_fjords January 9 2009, 05:44:32 UTC

Ianto is going to get her some pink ones!

thrace_adams February 5 2009, 01:02:03 UTC

Oh I really liked this. I love that it had a plot, that things were only alluded to, and the obvious affection Jack and Ianto have for each other. Well done. (and it made me smile :) )

blue_fjords February 5 2009, 05:56:00 UTC

Thanks! I like little self-contained plot stories!

qthelights February 16 2009, 13:09:37 UTC

I'm really really enjoying your "team with suzie" fic in your 'red is my colour' collection. The team before Gwen is almost never explored in fanfic, which is a shame, because as you're showing us, it's extremely interesting! I love the idea of Suzie knowing about Jack and Ianto - and that Ianto is his own character, not just a tag-along child (despite his being injured in this particular fic!).

blue_fjords February 16 2009, 14:37:44 UTC

Thanks!
Suzie struck me as being very observant, just not prone to sharing her observations. And I love, love, love the scientist/tech/geek getting in on the action. Suzie was second-in-command of an alien-hunting team. Woman could handle a weapon (as we find out w/ the Life Knife eventually).
And I'm glad Ianto came across here -- I didn't want him to be magical kung fu Ianto, but not a total wimp, either. There were just way more aliens than humans in this, and he had the least amount of experience.