Red Is My Colour Prompt for Day Four

Jan 04, 2009 11:50

Title:  Suzie Costello Has Two Daddies

Author:  blue_fjords

Pairings/Characters:  Suzie, slight Jack/Ianto

Setting:  pre-series one

Word Count:  roughly 1,750

Disclaimer:  I own nothing.

Rating:  PG

Fic here! )

tw: jack/ianto, tw: suzie, red is my colour, fic

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seize January 5 2009, 02:12:15 UTC
Good action, great dialogue, and a snappy ending! This was a great little fic. Off to explore more, definitely.

Suzie craned her neck to peer in the back. “Jack, you thinking what I’m thinking?”

“You’re mentally undressing our Mr. Jones, too?”

That made me laugh out loud and clap my hands loud enough to wake up the cat and roommates...you're in big trouble.

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blue_fjords January 5 2009, 03:07:22 UTC
Not your cat! I just told one of my dogs he was on guard duty. He foisted it off on the cat. She walked away. Le sigh.
Glad you liked it!

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seize January 5 2009, 02:12:54 UTC
HEY! DC metro area? Bethesda here!

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blue_fjords January 5 2009, 02:57:07 UTC
Sweet. I live about twenty minutes further out into the boonies, but work around Dupont Circle. It's a crap commute.

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adafrog January 5 2009, 04:00:34 UTC
Great little story, thanks.

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genagirl January 5 2009, 04:39:20 UTC
Oh, I really enjoyed that. I like fics with Suzie in them, and this one really caught what I saw of her personality (before the whole obession thing got out of hand). I love her shots at Ianto and his cool response - the pink boots were perfect! *mems*

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blue_fjords January 5 2009, 13:07:45 UTC
Thanks so much!
If Ianto had had the extra time, he was going to stencil Suzie's name and a flower on those boots, but then Lisa woke up.

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jo02 January 5 2009, 10:12:12 UTC
This was a really neat story.

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