[FanFic] Beyond the Veil (Chapter 22)

[bloodyroose]

Comments

[awshin]

Hmm. Actually, junsu reminds me of an autistic child who would refer to himself in 3rd person POV, like a little kid who hasn't grown up to the world. =x And when he's upset, you'd need to take a lot of effort to get his attention back. Hehe. Thanks for the update!

[cute_chan]

hey girl~ how have you been?

im so sorry for not commenting >< im tooo busy but im done with half of my work, i need to post my fics in a new community for the readers ^^"

but im always reading the chapters so im moving with you everyday ^^

thank god they dont have to fight >< i was scared~

and poor baby~ su thought he hates him ><

but thank god he knows he's a good baby now ^^

about the winglin account, its not working with me too >< i dont know what happened

[yasemj]

waaaaaaaaaaa... GoOOOOOODDD baby!! Nice baby!!
I was soo worrieed about Su.. We know that he's a bit childish and all but... Well.. I want the baby to be the cutest!! ahaha.. Don't you think that the rule 'mother don't want baby, baby die' is a bit harsh? harshy harshy... Y-Y
The baby must have been afraid too, that's why he immediately carried them all back to the spear.. I think Su would be overly cute, if he hit the spear then ran back to Chunnie..
Ohh.. What are they all doing in the rain? The bad thing was using the rain right? Now that I think of it.. Will it be Rain?? hahaha!! Ahh.. Maria.. So many puzzles.. I love it..
Thanks for the update!!!! Thank You for not letting them fight!! Good job Su!! *2 thumbs up* Lots of Love!! BTW.. I'm still waiting and hoping for my KiMin rated.. And why isn't there news about them? aiisshhee.. Sorry for being too noisy.. I'll shut up now! hehehe..

[cloudy_violet]

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