[FanFic] Beyond the Veil (Chapter 22)

[bloodyroose]

Comments

[joongie_oopa1]

aaaw~
thank god they don't have to fight
poor Su... he sounds so adorable
like a baby..
Disney movies?
lol... SO CUTE~
nyaaa~ >_<

update soon hon ^^

p.s: poor Teukie :(

[sheilapiglet]

what i don't understand is why JS's speaking as if he's a toddler?...haha....just because he's innocent and fragile, doesn't mean he's incapable of using proper grammer like everybody else...lol...but other than that, I'm glad that 2U ended up not having to fight each other afterall.....update soon!=)

[chunlovesu]

aww su soo cute.hope they are going to be fine.i wonder who is that dark shadow hrmm

[ime_fr]

sorry to not have commenting before, i'm too busy =.= uni sucks XD
it's great that yunchun got the half of the spear for each one of them ^^ and LOL su is so childish XD at least now, he's not saying that his baby is bad lol
and poor teukie, he think he'll lose his son if chun will go back to earth >.< but i wonder if they'll really leave? and i wonder what'll happen when the baby will be born since chun won't be a fog anymore right? and maybe he'll be able to defeat this thing with yunho's help ^^

[jihae_shii]

ooh! su's the best XD just one hit and the spear is down xDDD aigooo, love your baby su D: he's the precious yoosu baby!!