Forget Me Not (Episode 3)

Dec 31, 2007 09:40

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sori1773 December 31 2007, 15:51:33 UTC
you totally had me at someone he ate. omg. *dies* I loved the twist at the end and how real the whole thing felt and just. blood sucking sex FTW! awesome!

(and, seriously, damnit. like i really need another fandom. :D)

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spikedluv December 31 2007, 17:38:44 UTC
Eeeee! I can't believe you read this! Yay!

Hee! Glad you liked that line. I had quite a bit of fun writing this one. And the twist at the end, which was not my original intent, but once I thought of it I had to do it.

blood sucking sex FTW!

*squeals* Always!

But you do, you DO!!! I haven't read the books (I enjoyed the tv series so much, I'm afraid that reading the books will make the series pale in comparison, so I refuse to read them. Until I change my mind. *g*), but the series (of which there may only be one season :( ) was really good. If/When the DVDs come out in the US I'll make sure you get a set. *eg* Hey, you forced me into introduced me to TFATF, it's only fair I return the favor. *weg*

(Speaking of which, I haven't forgotten the other thing, and I even have an idea for it, it's just, well, clearly, going to be a leeeetle bit late. *g*)

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elmyraemilie March 26 2008, 02:33:02 UTC
You, too? I am *so* hooked on this. Henry, son of Henry, therefore half-brother of my first heroine Elizabeth; a vampire; freakin' *gorgeous*; spunky, sharp-witted, flawed heroine Vicki; Mike, with jaw of steel--what is not to love?

Cannot find episodes, so have bought books. All of them at one time. Oh, dear.

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phantomminuet December 31 2007, 16:18:13 UTC
Damn, that was good! I hope there's going to be more, so we can watch Henry seduce Mike all over again, and so Henry can go all vampire freak on the bad guys. ;-)

“Oh, thank god,” Mike said. “For a second there I thought he’d lost his mind.”

Heh. I adore your Mike, because he sounds just like Mike should sound. :-)

I enjoyed those nice moments between golem Henry and Coreen, too. And the M/H sex was verra hot, although I would expect no less from you. Henry drawing Mike is starting to be one of my favorite BT fanfic conventions.

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spikedluv December 31 2007, 17:45:03 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm pleased that you enjoyed this, and thrilled that you think I write Mike well. *g*

I left it opened ended, sort of like an episode, but I'm not 100% sure there will be a sequel. Though you make a good argument, because who wouldn't want to see Henry seduce Mike all over again, and Mike trying not to think about the biting and the sex every time Henry's in the room... *g*

Glad you liked the scenes with Henry and Coreen; I had quite a bit of fun writing Coreen. And I'm happy you thought the sex was hot. *g*

Oh, god, yes, Henry drawing Mike! I'm not sure I've yet written a Mike/Henry fic that hasn't included it! Remember seeing that meme a while back, you know it's a Spikedluv fic if..., well, Henry drawing Mike may end up being my BT trademark. As well as biting during sex because...hot. *g*

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songfire3 December 31 2007, 16:38:22 UTC
Beautiful!! I loved the whole Henry/Coreen interaction, and of course (as always) you got Mike's and Henry's characters exactly right. *g* And now I want to read the sequel....!

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spikedluv January 1 2008, 13:12:47 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm pleased that you thought this was beautiful, and that you enjoyed the Henry/Coreen interaction. I had fun writing them. And I'm thrilled that you think I got Mike's and Henry's characters right. *g*

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ravenboo December 31 2007, 17:05:16 UTC
Very good story !!!!! :D

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spikedluv January 1 2008, 13:23:42 UTC
Thank you! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. *g*

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ravenboo January 1 2008, 16:51:38 UTC
I did :D

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vivichick December 31 2007, 17:27:05 UTC
Hooray! I Love Menry! hmm... Menry? Mitzroy? Hellucci? No clue what to call them, but I love it!
Poor, conflicted drunken Mike. Poor badly constructed doppleganger. So sad. So hot.
I love your stuff. Keep it coming :)

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spikedluv January 1 2008, 13:25:22 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm pleased that you enjoyed this, with poor Mike falling for Henry's doppleganger, and the poor doppleganger that wasn't made right. *g*

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