Fic: Loving In Tongues

Mar 20, 2011 18:03

Title: Loving In Tongues
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birthday, crazy stuff, fic, gifts, f-list love, nc-17, harry/draco, fic: one-shot

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brinimc March 20 2011, 23:36:48 UTC
EEEEEEEEEK! Bleedy, this is possibly one of your best stories! I love it so much, there was so much emotion here. I teared up a bit when Harry was upset cause you know I love a hurt Harry. That was so sad, when he got upset. I love how Draco is all pouty like "I apologized 5 times!" Hahahaha, good job, Draco! Sneaky arsed Slytherin!

It was, however, also his least favourite part because he didn’t understand what Harry was saying!
I think that is such a good way to describe how Draco must feel about the parseltongue, cause while it is hot, I imagine that he would get annoyed not being able to understand what Harry was saying. It figures that he has to ruin it but wanting to know, but then again it makes sense cause I would want to know too!

“I don’t remember what I said, Draco,” Harry would say, curling around Draco in his usual post-coital snuggle. “It’s all, you know, in the heat of the moment.”I suppose in a way, Harry is at fault too because he was keeping secrets from Draco and he should know that that is a no-no. But then ( ... )

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vanessawolfie March 20 2011, 23:46:47 UTC
Just want to say that this comment concretes the reasons I had for giving you a bday gift honey. I love your comments and you squee moments.
and 621 words of a comment ? That's awesome!

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brinimc March 20 2011, 23:48:35 UTC
But I used her quotes! That takes out a good number of words!

*Loves Squeeing over Bleedy*

Thank you! And thank you again for my bday gift from you! :)

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bleedforyou1 March 26 2011, 16:03:04 UTC
*agrees whole-heartedly*

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lokifan March 20 2011, 23:59:36 UTC
SO. ADORABLE.

I loved the physicality of the sex - them grappling at each other in their desperation was totally hot. And what a lovely, happy-making ending! :) Draco's TOTAL SNEAKING!FAIL in the afterglow just made it even cuter.

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bleedforyou1 March 26 2011, 16:03:32 UTC
Eeeeeek THANK YOU! I'm so happy you enjoyed it XD

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blossomdreams March 21 2011, 00:48:23 UTC
Aww such a cute and hot fic. I love parseltongue and Draco finding out is so Slytherin and so cute. :)

Wonderful job!

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bleedforyou1 March 26 2011, 16:05:16 UTC
Awww thank you so much bdreams :)

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lijahlover March 21 2011, 01:34:54 UTC
I have to agree with brinimc this fic is just so amazingly brilliant and so hot.

Rough sex and parseltongue you *rock*

These lines here hun are just mmmmmm *yummy*

Draco couldn’t even finish his sentence before Harry jumped on him, dragging him up and slamming his back against the wall, melding his lips hard against Draco’s.

“You beast! That hurt!” Draco yelped even as he was moaning into Harry’s mouth. Harry knew that Draco secretly loved being thrown around and banged against the wall or floor and the bruises in the morning were so worth it.

Such sexy visuals and you write them both so well. You capture a perfect sneaky Slytherin and his roaring lion beautifuly :)

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bleedforyou1 March 26 2011, 16:05:59 UTC
Eeeek I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much LL!

You capture a perfect sneaky Slytherin and his roaring lion beautifuly :) AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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uniquepov March 21 2011, 02:24:01 UTC
Sooooooooo hawt! Sooo sweet! So adorable! *goes back and reads it again*

Oh, and hawt. did I mention hawt?

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bleedforyou1 March 26 2011, 16:07:10 UTC
Eeek!!!! thank you so much :D

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