The Sexual Escapades of Alfred F. Jones::Part 1::

[blahblahyourmom]

Title: The Sexual Escapades of Alfred F. Jones
Author/Artist: blahblahyourmom 
Character(s) or Pairing(s): America, England, Russia, Japan,
Rating: M
Warnings: Underage sex, cursing, gay sex, slight dub-con? Maybe OOC-ness? IDK.
Summary: The romantic, humorous, and dramatic life of Alfred F. Jones as he navigates from high school into college and the real world.

Comments

[glittertech]

This sounds interesting. The part where the tackling turned to fighting which turned to dry-humping made me laugh out loud. Although I reeeeaaaalllllly want to know who the baker is, just to see who's interfering.

As for con-crit, I love to help but it makes me feel offensive afterwards. Here I go:
The coding you used didn't work, because technology is stupid that way.
"Alfred hadn't even iinvited/i the fake limey bastard."
"Alfred gave Arthur a look that clearly said i'Go on'/i."

"Alfred threw the rest of the burger him which caused the other boy to dive out of the way with a high pitched shriek."
Should that be "at him?"

[blahblahyourmom]

OTL Thank you for pointing the coding issue out.

Yeah. "at him."

Derp. I should re-read what I write more than once.

[blahblahyourmom]

o3o I wasn't sure if it was funny or not. I just...went with it and yeah. You'll see~ Hehheh.