Dude, seriously, that was awesome! I want to pick out my favorite parts but there are too many! The bit about the Portuguese maid, and Stranz being almost gay, and threatening to make Mama haunt Katie! And "We developed eyelids together!"
For some reason, I need a big, big build up to write smut
Apparently all I need is a word that sounds relatively dirty D:
Anyway, this was great! I really did enjoy reading it, and I like that I actually felt for Fairchild, yanno? It's too darned easy to see her as just a villianous bitch because..erm well the movie only paints her that way.
Thanks! I just love Amy Pohler so much, that she could have been stomping on litte kittens for the whole movie, and i'm sure I could have found her a valid reason for it! :D
Wow, you ficwriters are brilliant, able to flesh out characters like Fairchild (who we really only see as psychobitch) and make them more believable. Excellent!!
On a personal note, I would have liked to see this a little longer, especially about their relationship a bit. Although the format you used (which is a brilliant idea, btw) probably did restrict things a bit.
What I'm saying is, write me more Stranz/Fairchild NOW please and thanks.
((is beta'ing now that ficathon is over ;_; I am sorry that I am secretly made of the suck.))
Thanks hon! Yeah, I would have liked to WRITE this longer too, but I am still finishing my other BoG fic, not to mention the million/zillion art thangs I'm supposed to be doing.
I'd love to write/read a longer, drawn out first time sex fic with these two!
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Dude, seriously, that was awesome! I want to pick out my favorite parts but there are too many! The bit about the Portuguese maid, and Stranz being almost gay, and threatening to make Mama haunt Katie! And "We developed eyelids together!"
A+ for this assignment. XD
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I really do find them (the twins) fascinating though, and wanted to explore how they may have become a couple.
Thanks for your kind words.
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Apparently all I need is a word that sounds relatively dirty D:
Anyway, this was great! I really did enjoy reading it, and I like that I actually felt for Fairchild, yanno? It's too darned easy to see her as just a villianous bitch because..erm well the movie only paints her that way.
Sex ed for Stranz XD
Nice job!
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Wow, you ficwriters are brilliant, able to flesh out characters like Fairchild (who we really only see as psychobitch) and make them more believable. Excellent!!
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I think the twins are endlessly interesting (and hawt) so this was fun to do! Thanks for R&Ring! <3
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On a personal note, I would have liked to see this a little longer, especially about their relationship a bit. Although the format you used (which is a brilliant idea, btw) probably did restrict things a bit.
What I'm saying is, write me more Stranz/Fairchild NOW please and thanks.
((is beta'ing now that ficathon is over ;_; I am sorry that I am secretly made of the suck.))
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I'd love to write/read a longer, drawn out first time sex fic with these two!
Oh, and your suckage? Not exactly a seekrit! ;^D
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