FIC: Grenade

[blackstarnebula]

 
Title: Grenade (aka California Girl pt2)
Pairing: Taeyang/Selena (OC)
Rating: R
Summary: Young Bae is in Tokyo where he runs into a past love, part 2 of California Girl
Note: Originally California Girl was suppose to be a oneshot but I got inspire and decided to make it a series of oneshots, you don't really need to have read the Cali Girl to

Comments

[bae_mac]

You should write more - REALLY.

The last scene - my thoughts were a bit more sadistic! LOL!

He walks over to her and grabs her chin and brings her faces up to his. She doesn’t fight him as he stares into her hazel eyes. Unprintable expletives filled his thoughts but remained unspoken and that didn't help him at all. He just fucked the hell out of her yet he could again already feel the stirring of his loins and he hated her for that. Hated himself more for he knows that if he kisses her again, it's going to be a cycle - the kind that would only have him wanting and begging more for something that has already slipped off his hand - off his life

[blackstarnebula]

haha you're a lot meaner than me, lol. But I felt like his lust and love was greater than his anger, but maybe I should have had him be a little more mean.

Also yes, nice and shy YB is so overplayed and I'm sure that's mostly his public face. The guy I read about in interviews is a lot darker than most fics make him out to be.

[bae_mac]

haha! I don't know - lust,love and anger kind of goes hand in hand. Or maybe that's just me? XD

Yes! Darker indeed and how I wish that he slowly reveals even just a bit of this in his music.

Your icon is hypnotizing me by the way. LOL!

[bae_mac]

*and before sanity*

[vulgarchic]

this was sooooooo good. I love your writing~
The part about him constantly calling her and her getting Aimee to call made him sound like a bit of a creep lol But it reinforces how bad he still wants her. And her...what's so special about your boyfriend when you have one crazy hot passionate guy in front of you who can give you everything and more~~

[blackstarnebula]

thank you, and yeah YB is very into her and while she's into him she has reasons to stay with BF

[yb_baby]

damn!!! so hot and nicely written..
great job ^^

love the lines especially the last line..

thanks for sharing..

piglet says i have to encourange you.. to write more heheh

[blackstarnebula]

lol, this is you? Thanks and I will be continuing it.

[yb_baby]

hhahaha yeah.. I do read fics heheh.. and do the commenting at times ^^

yehey excited... you know ilove GDYB but hey i love this story too ..