Makeshift [Part 3]

May 24, 2012 21:16

Rating: R / NC-17 (for content)
Eunsook / Minho
Genre: Romance
Words: *sings* Moooooore words than plaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanned.
Note: Okay, serious moment here. Just so you know I'd always planned to take it in this direction. Kind of explores life and both sides of an argument without demeaning or belittling either sides argument. So uh, yeah? But ( Read more... )

minew, r, gwiboon, minhonew, tofuho, taeyeon, eunsook, junghee, onho, jongkey, shinee

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acutepencil May 25 2012, 04:03:36 UTC
Jjong giving words of wisdom. I was sobbing at that part. since when is Jjong a source of knowledge on anything? Oh my god this is too perfect augh.

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ittybittydaiyu May 25 2012, 05:24:28 UTC
I'm going to cy my heart dropped at her wanting to kill baby
But then Minho
Ugh
I'm glad she kept it
Yaaaay

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littlemelonblue May 25 2012, 07:27:00 UTC
SO. Hi. I'm going to leave you another incoherent comment. Yet again.

When I saw that you updated I immediately went: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA LKDF;SLDKF;LSDFKSDJFKSDJFKDJKFJSDKFJ SO EXCITED!!

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abconjugate November 11 2012, 22:08:16 UTC
omg this was like, the most emotional thing ever.
and your stories make me stay up way to late (or early) to read them because once I start, I just can't stop. And I think you are probably my favourite SHINee writer as of right now (and possibly ever).
I can't even express how much I love your writing and all your stories. <3

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blacknerdjade November 23 2012, 22:13:41 UTC
*Cries and wibbles and sobs into your freshly washed hair* THIS IS SO SWEET I don't know what to do but CRY INTO YOUR HAIR AND HUG YOUR HEAD!

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bluemaid86 August 2 2013, 22:59:24 UTC
Damn what a hard read but still so good!

I'm not sure you'll ever see this comment since this story is kinda old & I haven't even finished all the chapters yet tbh but really round of applause to your apt handing of such a touchy topic. You not only showed all sides of the coin concerning this situation but imo manage to do so in a way that didn't put any of the characters in a bad or vilified light!

Regardless of where one might stand on this issues, whether they agree w/ the characters actions in the end or think them wrong or right I don't believe anyone can walk away without seeing where everyone was coming likewise hate them or think badly of them. That some good writing imo :D

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blacknerdjade August 5 2013, 15:26:24 UTC
I got bad eyes but that's why the doctor gave me good glasses so I could see *bah-dah-ting*

ANYWAYS,

Yeah. Pretty hard thing to write too. I didn't think it would go over well because of the topic but it was the purpose of the entire damn story to begin with so. I tried really hard not to make anyone look evil and to make sure everyone's side was told correctly because there are SO many sides, so many untold side to situations like these. I'm REALLY glad it came off well. And I super appreciate you reading it after all this time!!!

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