House Fic: J.W., which sometimes means Just Waiting

Dec 10, 2013 21:39

Title: J.W., which sometimes means Just Waiting
NOTE: This is based on J.W. by barefootpuddles, and you'll need to read that first.
Author: Blackmare
Rating: G
Pairing: House/Wilson, gen
Word Count: approx. 1200
Beta: nightdog_barks
Summary: It could be that House isn't the only one of them who's a little pathological.
Notes: barefootpuddles' story is here, and this one makes no sense ( Read more... )

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barefootpuddles December 11 2013, 06:04:46 UTC
Oh, my, this is good.

This piece has got that lovely slow pace that I adore in your fics. And I especially like that you continued it from Wilson's POV (something there is just not enough of in most H/W fanfiction).

"I'm not sure I'll ever understand you," he said.

"Good," House replied. "Now we're even."

I have a theory on what House was doing with the 'G.H.'. He is making sure that every time Wilson lights up, he will be reminded that he is breaking a promise to House (the guilt should work better than anything else he could could).

"Julius Watten didn't exist," House said. "Sometimes I wonder if you do."Yeah, the whole "you're all persona" thing. It really bugs House that he can't quite figure Wilson out completely, but it probably charms him too ( ... )

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blackmare December 11 2013, 06:15:17 UTC
:-D

Yeah, generally if I'm going to play in someone else's sandbox, I try to keep the tone and POV intact.

Resounding yes on the guilt tactic, though I suspect there's more going on than that. There usually is, with House.

I did make sure those candy cigs were still pretty easy to get, before I wrote them into the story. I think I had them a time or two as a kid, but they really are pretty terrible, so there wasn't much appeal for me.

The back-and-forth of ideas and stories is something I've missed in fandom, so I've been enjoying this exchange project a whole lot. If you ever get ideas to play with anything of mine, just know you have blanket permission to do it.

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menolly_au December 11 2013, 06:22:34 UTC
It's a good day for H/W today :) That was a great followup to barefootpuddles piece. I love the closing scene and the exchange BFP quotes.

"Julius Watten didn't exist," House said. "Sometimes I wonder if you do."

Well, there was a rumour at one stage that Wilson didn't actually exist but was House's imaginary friend :)

I wonder if House is going to use the J.W lighter....

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blackmare December 11 2013, 18:48:50 UTC
Hah, I remember that Wilson-as-Harvey theory, vaguely.

House will definitely keep Wilson's old lighter. He's not much for giving things back, in the first place, but in my mind I figure House always has either matches or a lighter on him. I don't think he smokes, other than the occasional act of rebellion like we've seen on the show; I just think he likes knowing that if he wants to set something on fire, he can.

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sheppa December 11 2013, 11:42:34 UTC
OMG! A delight to read. Thank both of you for writing and sharing these lovely stories.

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blackmare December 11 2013, 18:50:35 UTC
Thank you! I've missed the back-and-forth spark of writing in this fandom, so this was really fun for me. I'd be delighted if someone else picked it up and ran with it, too.

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yarroway December 11 2013, 12:33:08 UTC
This is just wonderful.

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blackmare December 11 2013, 18:52:48 UTC
Thanks!

It was one of those things where I read the original one and my brain immediately said, "Okay, here's what happens next," and I needed to just write it and get it out there.

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srsly_yes December 11 2013, 17:45:27 UTC
Each guy has a lighter with the other's initials on it. Yes. ♥

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blackmare December 11 2013, 18:53:45 UTC
Yep. Because House? Is never giving Wilson's old lighter back.

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