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[Series]Betrayal -- A Prequel

Mar 02, 2009 21:44

Title : Betrayal - A Prequel, chapter 1

Author : freedomthisway

Rating : R for the usage of bad languages and mention of porn.

Character/Pairing : Eunhyuk, Yehsung, Junsu and other made up characters/YeHyuk, friendship HyukSu.

Word Count : 2563 words for this chapter

Warning : Bad, bad Yehsungie.

Genre : angst, maybe a bit of crack, and then angst again ( Read more... )

pairing: yehyuk, series fic, hyukjae is my wonbin, fandom: super junior, my muses flows, fangirling korea, angst

Comments 24

black_pendant March 2 2009, 14:52:02 UTC

SPOT FOR NHI~!

newportdreams March 2 2009, 21:57:12 UTC

This is such a great start! Your style...your way of describing the stress and angst Hyukjae has been under all of these years...made me feel tortured as well. And my favorite paragraph:
"Things are getting worse for Hyukjae when it turns out Yehsung is a hyperactive bastard. The movie has been running for 30 minutes and Yehsung’s hand has unintentionally touched Hyukjae’s hand five times, his knee has bumped Hyukjae’s more than ten times, and his shoulder has stuck to Hyukjae’s for the last 15 minutes. Not to mention his smoky laugh every time one of the character, Jean-whatever (Hyukjae has not possessed enough concentration at the moment to catch up the name), makes some random jokes on the heroine. The vibration of his laugh feels inexplicably erotic on Hyukjae’s skin."
Perfection.
Cannot wait to read more. Thanks for sharing!

freedomthisway March 5 2009, 03:57:17 UTC

Thank you~!

And LOL you're stealing Nhi's spot. xDDD

Btw, new chapter is upped~!

runawayxxlovee March 3 2009, 07:34:14 UTC

Did someone just steal my spot or am I looking at it wrong? D:

BUT HOMG YOU WROTE YEHYUK FOR ME~~ I LOVE YOU SO MUCH sorry I couldn't read earlier

ahhh, so cute. really really. awkward teenager....*imagines* I'm glad you've noticed the wonders of yehyuk XD

I can't wait for the next part~! this was too good. eeeeee. 8D I read this instead of work on my hw and I'm totally glad I did.

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kangfany March 2 2009, 18:42:33 UTC

AHHHH. CONTINUATION PLEASE. ♥
Sweetie, this was just amazing! I looooooved every single part of it. I need the smut section, dammit. D:! -flails at her!-

psychobarbiehax March 2 2009, 23:15:18 UTC

I like this... keep this up, i wanna read more (are you going to write the smut?)

freedomthisway March 5 2009, 04:05:11 UTC

Thank you~! And sorry I won't. :))

Still has brain damaged from the last smut I've written. :D

New chapter is upped, Nicole. Read? :DD

freedomthisway March 5 2009, 04:01:53 UTC

*huggles*

So glad you like this~! xDDD

But sorry, no smut. :)) I wrote KiHae smut once and my brain still hasn't fully recovered from that. T.T

New chapter is upped, doll~!

imsweet_11 March 3 2009, 05:08:44 UTC

omg...
this is so good..
you're really good in describing hyukki';s emotions..
and hehheh...he finally lost his virginity huh..
oh well, he's cute^^
*huggles*

freedomthisway March 5 2009, 04:06:12 UTC

xDDD

Thank you~! *huggles back*

New chapter is upped~! Hope you like that too~!

g_myzo March 3 2009, 17:47:02 UTC

omygosh, this is amazing! i love it! horny!eunhyuk is so funny XDD I was grinning all the way through..
the hyperactive bastard part caught me off guard a bit and i loved it

freedomthisway March 5 2009, 04:06:56 UTC

*grins*

Thank you, dear~!

New chapter is upped, btw. :D

renichifreak March 3 2009, 21:37:53 UTC

...you know you wanna write more, right...???::begs::

Thank you for the call out!!!::hugs you::Yehyuk is my #2 SuJu OTP...it's totally hot...and YAY!!! You wrote one!!

freedomthisway March 5 2009, 04:08:09 UTC

Oh yes, I do. And I have~!

New chapter is upped~! xDD

And you're welcome~! You often support me with your comments on my fics and it's one of my ways to say thank you~! xDD

renichifreak March 5 2009, 04:13:11 UTC

I comment because you deserve it!!!