[Series]Betrayal -- A Prequel

[black_pendant]

Title : Betrayal - A Prequel, chapter 1

Author : freedomthisway

Rating : R for the usage of bad languages and mention of porn.

Character/Pairing : Eunhyuk, Yehsung, Junsu and other made up characters/YeHyuk, friendship HyukSu.

Word Count : 2563 words for this chapter

Warning : Bad, bad Yehsungie.

Genre : angst, maybe a bit of crack, and then angst again

Comments

[black_pendant]

SPOT FOR NHI~!

[newportdreams]

This is such a great start! Your style...your way of describing the stress and angst Hyukjae has been under all of these years...made me feel tortured as well. And my favorite paragraph:
"Things are getting worse for Hyukjae when it turns out Yehsung is a hyperactive bastard. The movie has been running for 30 minutes and Yehsung’s hand has unintentionally touched Hyukjae’s hand five times, his knee has bumped Hyukjae’s more than ten times, and his shoulder has stuck to Hyukjae’s for the last 15 minutes. Not to mention his smoky laugh every time one of the character, Jean-whatever (Hyukjae has not possessed enough concentration at the moment to catch up the name), makes some random jokes on the heroine. The vibration of his laugh feels inexplicably erotic on Hyukjae’s skin."
Perfection.
Cannot wait to read more. Thanks for sharing!

[freedomthisway]

Thank you~!

And LOL you're stealing Nhi's spot. xDDD

Btw, new chapter is upped~!

[runawayxxlovee]

Did someone just steal my spot or am I looking at it wrong? D:

BUT HOMG YOU WROTE YEHYUK FOR ME~~ I LOVE YOU SO MUCH sorry I couldn't read earlier

ahhh, so cute. really really. awkward teenager....*imagines* I'm glad you've noticed the wonders of yehyuk XD

I can't wait for the next part~! this was too good. eeeeee. 8D I read this instead of work on my hw and I'm totally glad I did.

[freedomthisway]

LOLOLOL

Yup,looks like it is stolen. xDD

But unintentionally, I believe. Idk why, but some people can't find link to comment in my LJ layout. Perhaps I should change it... :D

AND YES ILYSM TOO~! New chapter is upped, and it's still for you! xD

[newportdreams]

...sorry bout that- the story moved me so I replied...I'll try to be more observant next time...