Gravity, Gibbs, and Other Facts of the Universe

[black_k_kat]

Rating: PG (for safety)
Word count: ~ 1,500
Warnings: Angst. Fluff. Slash (of the Gibbs/DiNozzo persuasion). English from a non-native. Business as usual, nothing to see; move along (to the story, I mean). Don’t let the quirky title fool you, either: it’s angst-heavy.
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters are the property of their respective owners

Comments

[selenic76]

Nice work! I really like how you describe Gibbs from Tony's point of view, talking about his real and apparent size, about how he seems eternal, even though he's just a man. And I love the ending, the soft hand in the hair, and Tony's determination not to take things for granted, ♥!

From the perspective of another non-native writer, your English seems really good. The story was easy to follow and lovely to read. It wasn't too angsty at all, and had the right amount of fluff :)

And as another not-yet-so-experienced writer of the Gibbs/DiNozzo persuasion, I think you have captured the characters nicely. (I always struggle with Gibbs more than Tony, and being slightly perfectionist, I always worry that I don't get either of them right.)

So, welcome to the fandom, hope you enjoy it, write more please! ^_^

[singer_s_lament]

Very very nice. I really enjoyed the way you showed the differences in Gibbs' size compared to Tony along with how he realized Gibbs was aging. This is a very amazing story. :-)

[sparklebutch]

This is a very good fic. I'm glad ceruleancat linked me to it. Good writing, good level of emotion without going into overdrive - just good. Thank you.

[ceruleancat]

Very nicely done, the descriptions of Tony's perspectives and the tone of the case itself. Nothing wrong with your English. Hope you keep writing more of this pairing.

[gibbsgirlabby]

This was a great first fic, and hopefully won't be a last fic! Write on!