Comments | black_eyedgirl: House MD FF: "Ulterior Motives" (House/Chase, PG-13)

black_eyedgirl

House MD FF: "Ulterior Motives" (House/Chase, PG-13)

Jan 01, 2006 02:45

Title: Ulterior Motives
Fandom: House, MD
Pairing: House/Chase (big surprise there, I know)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff/Drama
Length: One-shot, 3000 words
Disclaimer: House and all its characters are, sadly, not mine.
Summary: Chase does something nice for House. House, naturally, has to find out why. Or that's what he says when Wilson asks him how it ( Read more... )

fanfic: festive, house md, house md: fanfic, fanfic

Comments 42

titti January 1 2006, 03:48:51 UTC

I love how you developed the story, showing the different steps through the month. Wilson's line about Chase having won because he made House do something nice is priceless.

Very good story.

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 05:18:40 UTC

"I love how you developed the story, showing the different steps through the month."
Oh, yay! I was still thinking about reordering bits of this just before posting, so I'm glad it feels in the right order.

And Wilson is a sneaky one - he keeps creeping into my House/Chase stuff, entirely uninvited, and stealing the good lines!

Thanks for commenting :-)

forensicxjunkie January 1 2006, 04:27:55 UTC

I. love. this....and this so brought me back to my uber-hyper state! YAY!

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 05:19:33 UTC

XD Well I'm glad I can make *someone* happy. Or hyper at least... Yay! for feedback!

javelle January 1 2006, 04:56:12 UTC

I like fluff. Nothing wrong with making people happy, is there?

I particularly liked Dec 16th, 20th and 21st. The 16th and 20th made me go awww, and the 21st made me go XDXDXD. In general I liked the little bits that show that they know each other well, which is to be expected with House and Chase. Thanks for sharing it.

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 05:22:27 UTC

"I like fluff. Nothing wrong with making people happy, is there?"
I just always feel *guilty* posting fluff. Like I should be writing serious and important things, and instead I'm writing happy kissing things...

But I like *reading* it, and the bunnies were there, so off I went. And thanks for picking out the days you liked, they were some of my favourites too. Especially 20 and 21, which are probably the fluffiest of all actually, being an "awww" moment beside a giggly one. Ah well, I shall just resign myself to my fate. Fluff's just me!

tyrical January 1 2006, 06:12:08 UTC

Lovely thing this was.
I loved the interaction of the game.
I liked when House figured it out.
I loved Chase's secret smiles.
The scene with gluing the television buttons and remote. Classic

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 06:34:49 UTC

Aww, thank you! (On reflection, Chase does spend an awful lot of this fic smiling at House. Guess that's just what fluff does for you!) I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

evila_elf January 1 2006, 06:58:55 UTC

Okay...I hate House/Chase fluff...
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But I think you have converted me.
Damn that was fun!
Loved the ping ponging back and forth of good deeds!
*adds to memories*

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 07:33:01 UTC

:-)

Come to the dark side, we have cookies! (Although, House/Chase fluff is probably the pink side, or something else warm and fuzzy...)

Also, thanks for using the word "ping ponging" because that's exactly what I was going for, even if I couldn't think of the descriptor! Glad you enjoyed, and 'fun' was what I was trying to write, even if I did feel a bit guilty for not being immersed in uber-angst.

Remember the cookies!

evila_elf January 1 2006, 08:19:00 UTC

Ooh...welcome to the pink side...has a lovely ring to it, hehe :)
Mmmmm cooookies *drools*