Everything at Once- CHAPTER 11.5-DELETED SCENE-UNDERSTOOD--JUSTIN’S POV-NC-17

[plumsuede]

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EAO Deleted Scene-Understood-Justin's POV

[plumsuede]

I really liked that though, no matter how fast the emotions went. Sometimes, I like it when it just jumps to it and packs all that detail right there. Maybe it's just me....

Thanks. It packed a punch. Sometimes that's nice. xoxoxo

EAO Deleted Scene-Understood-Justin's POV

[plumsuede]

thank you, Junie. I'm glad you liked it! Remind me, I have a vid suggestion for you. One you'll probably really like...

[mardicrew]

I really liked that.

It did switch fast, cut right back into itself. Curtain coming down.

EAO Deleted Scene-Understood-Justin's POV

[plumsuede]

I really liked that.

It did switch fast, cut right back into itself. Curtain coming down.

Yes, every time they did anything in front of that window, the emotions poured out like melted butter. I had to ground them from the window eventually, lol.

xoxoox

[thebrandytook]

"I try to think of a good reason why I spent four years convincing him that he loved me, so that I could turn around and leave him."

That line and the lines that followed it killed me in a beautiful way. I really do love this scene but I understand your reasons for taking it out.

[plumsuede]

"I try to think of a good reason why I spent four years convincing him that he loved me, so that I could turn around and leave him."

That line and the lines that followed it killed me in a beautiful way. I really do love this scene but I understand your reasons for taking it out.

Thank you. I liked it, too. A lot. Probably should've used it somewhere else! ;-)

[itsjustkristen]

I think I just spontaneously combusted. For me, this was probably the most beautiful love scenes ever.

EAO Deleted Scene-Understood-Justin's POV

[plumsuede]

I think I just spontaneously combusted. For me, this was probably the most beautiful love scenes ever.

*blushes* wow, thank you. You're so sweet. ♥