I cried a little bit reading Harper's eulogy, I can't lie. It...moved me, so thank you for writing such a beautiful and emotionally honest passage. And for a character we didn't even really get to know much about until well into this series! That is a feat
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Thanks so much for this feedback. It IS tricky to write a real person into a piece of fiction, but writing AC and his feud with Brian makes me laugh through the whole thing.
The next chapter is mostly written... I truly hope it won't be that long.
When I saw this posted I thought I would have to go back to the last chapter to remember where you left off. All I had to do was read the first sentence. You made me cry several times but also made me smile as well. I loved Amelia at the funeral. Also when Justin whisper to Brian "I already knowed that" you made me laugh. I can't believe you are almost done with this story. I am so going to miss it.
aw, that was so sweet to say, that you didn't need to go back to the last chapter. Pretty amazing since it's been about 16 months since the last chapter, lol. I'm glad that you smiled in between your tears!
Lori, This is an amazing chapter. I'm so glad that you've kept on writing this instead of giving up when your muses felt like quitting.
It was you and this story that got me hooked on watching 360! I think AC goes to hot places just so we can see him in those tight t-shirts he likes to wear.
It sounds like both Brian and Justin have worked through the worst of their problems. I'm really glad your muse came back.
Thanks, Jolie. I never felt like quitting, just mostly screaming the keyboard, lol. I'm glad you're enjoying AC; I rarely watch him, lol. I'm very happy my muse came back, too!!!
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OMG!!! (And I NEVER use that expression but I feel very justified in using it here) I was so incredibly thrilled to see this wonderful update from you, it truly was beyond my expectation and I absolutely loved the AC/Kinney rivalry, that was truly hilarious...:)
You were outstanding in wrapping up this very solemn journey for Allen and I felt so satisfied with how things worked out. Now I know its too soon but...please my dear woman follow-up as soon as possible because this is one series I'll never let go of...:)
This chapter brought laughter and tear to me. Bravo, Plum!
When I first read this story, I was a girl who just started her college life. When I first got your reply in e-mail, I never thought one day I would really become a professional translator.
Wow, how time flies, and its only been FIVE days since Alan's death, why do I have a feeling that it's been a whole life.
It's unbelievable how much time has passed and our lives have changed just in the course of this story. I'm so proud of you--becoming a translator! And yes, the 5 days since Alan's death have passed so slowly, I know! Thanks for your feedback!
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The next chapter is mostly written... I truly hope it won't be that long.
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You made me cry several times but also made me smile as well. I loved Amelia at the funeral. Also when Justin whisper to Brian "I already knowed that" you made me laugh.
I can't believe you are almost done with this story. I am so going to miss it.
Thanks!
Dee Dee
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This is an amazing chapter. I'm so glad that you've kept on writing this instead of giving up when your muses felt like quitting.
It was you and this story that got me hooked on watching 360! I think AC goes to hot places just so we can see him in those tight t-shirts he likes to wear.
It sounds like both Brian and Justin have worked through the worst of their problems. I'm really glad your muse came back.
Jolie
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OMG!!! (And I NEVER use that expression but I feel very justified in using it here) I was so incredibly thrilled to see this wonderful update from you, it truly was beyond my expectation and I absolutely loved the AC/Kinney rivalry, that was truly hilarious...:)
You were outstanding in wrapping up this very solemn journey for Allen and I felt so satisfied with how things worked out. Now I know its too soon but...please my dear woman follow-up as soon as possible because this is one series I'll never let go of...:)
Nicole
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When I first read this story, I was a girl who just started her college life. When I first got your reply in e-mail, I never thought one day I would really become a professional translator.
Wow, how time flies, and its only been FIVE days since Alan's death, why do I have a feeling that it's been a whole life.
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