Beyond the Yellow Brick Road-Chapter 44-Transient

[plumsuede]

Comments

[highd]

I held my breath reading this chapter Plum, I swear what a wonderful healing chapter. After the anguish and discovery of the last few chapters, the tears I cried for Alan and his family felt a bit happier. I really think you chose wonderful quotes from the show, they were wonderfully chose. I am happy for Daniel and his dirty knees. Daniel should stay dirty. Amelia might just be the cutest thief on the planet. The drawings made this so real, the little tributes to Alan. Seriously they broke me a bit

[plumsuede]

Heidi,
Thanks so much for your feedback. I truly appreciate it more than you know. I think the quotes give the story an interesting context, so I'm glad you liked them. Thanks for sticking with it; you make it a joy to laugh and cry all the way through the writing process.

~Plum

[vlredreign]

Okay, the funeral came out better than I'd hoped, the scene with Anderson Cooper was hysterical, Amelia stealing Sara's earring was...so Amelia, and painting Justin and Harper's studio with paint mixed with Alan's ashes was beyond right. Gabe getting blown by Daniel, holy shit! rotfl

And Richard has waffles on his ass, omg...

Thank you so much for updating this.

[plumsuede]

you're very welcome! Glad you liked it. I thought the AC scene came out really funny. I love the idea of them being rivals. It cracks me up. And yes, Richard has waffles... xoxoxo

[sunmontue]

Stunning. The mixing of Alan's ashes with the paint moved me to tears because it was just so perfect and fitting and RIGHT. Simply stunning.

[fraserette]

AGREED!

[plumsuede]

Thank you!!! I really appreciate your feedback. So glad you enjoyed it. xoox

[fraserette]

Daniel and Gabe, I love it. I hope that storyline continues, it would be nice for Gabe to have someone!!

I'm very happy with the update!

[plumsuede]

they were my favorite part of this chapter for sure!!! Thanks for your continued feedback!!! xoxo

[fraserette]

I'm re-reading again, it's a fav of mine and always fills my heart with love. I really wanna go to the Rockford now, or even drink Hawaiian Punch!

Any chance we will get some spin offs, say with Jonathan and Father Dick? hmm, please!?

[anno53]

This update was fabulous ... thanks for all of your hard work in getting it done. I love all of the characters and knowing how they are faring with Alan's death. The ashes in the paint was a stroke of genius!

I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

[plumsuede]

thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback. I hope the next chapter isn't too long in coming!