Fic: Nightmares (LoM)

[bistokids]

The poky stick strikes again! The first third of this has been lurking on my hard drive since the Flashfiction Fear Challenge (so a wee while now, sorry Loz, can we pretend it's on time? :D

Comments

[silvaa]

this was amazing and genuinely scary, you really captured Sam's fear and disorientation. Loved it.

x

[bistokids]

Thank you! :D I was reaching for a sense of disorientation - very pleased you think it worked.

[lozenger8]

Ooooh. That was really creepy.

[bistokids]

Thank you. Creepy is good! :)

[jean_geanie]

oooh I've got shivers down my spine.

Brilliant.

(especially Gene's tenderness at the end)

[bistokids]

Thanks! The Gene bit was actually the hardest to pitch, so I'm very glad you liked it.

[severinne]

That was brilliantly disorienting and scary as hell. Loved it, and plenty glad that Gene was there at the end :)

[bistokids]

Ah, but was he??? *wiggles fingers, goes 'woooooh'*

Brilliantly disorientating - love that! Thanks. :D

[dakfinv]

Brilliantly disturbing. You really capture the fluidity of dreams/nightmares. And poor Sam, freaked out of his skull.

[bistokids]

Thank you! :D I am drawn to freaked-out!Sam in canon (OK, I'm drawn to Simm acting his socks off, and who wouldn't be?) so it's an aspect that's great to play with. Glad you were disturbed! XD