Comments | bironic: Flashficlet: "One night in Princeton," Remy Hadley/Radek Zelenka, adult

bironic

Flashficlet: "One night in Princeton," Remy Hadley/Radek Zelenka, adult

Jan 28, 2010 07:43

Title: One Night in Princeton
Fandom: House/SGA
Pairing: Remy Hadley/Radek Zelenka
Rating: Adult
Word Count: 825
Spoilers: House 6.3 ("Epic Fail"); SGA series finale
A/N: A quick Porn Battle IX fic, prompt "unexpected." Read it there or below.

( She is a good head taller, and far more pleasing to the eye than he with his scruffy hair and growing potbelly, but then he is accustomed to being with women who outshine him. )

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Comments 21

waltzforanight January 30 2010, 02:35:21 UTC

Oh man, this is kind of impossibly brilliant. Your Zelenka voice is awesome (ah, I love him, okay) and you really made this work, despite the seemingly random nature of the pairing. In other words, \o/!

bironic January 31 2010, 01:57:54 UTC

That is so wonderful to hear. I don't know where the pairing came from either, but once I thought of it, I wanted to make it work - so I'm very glad it worked for you. Thanks so much!

malnpudl January 30 2010, 03:49:51 UTC

Oh, perfect. I've always thought that Radek is the sane woman's best choice from among all of the Atlantis men, and this ficlet shows me just that same Radek I've loved since his first appearance. Nicely interwoven with Remy's story on House, too (though it was terribly difficult not to type "Thirteen" there *g*). Wonderful. :-)

bironic January 31 2010, 01:59:09 UTC

Hee - I kept wanting to say Thirteen, too, but something told me she wouldn't introduce herself that way to a stranger. :) Radek is definitely an underappreciated choice - all a girl'd need to do is tolerate pigeons and a bit of fumbling, and she'd have all the brains and sweetness she could want.

Thanks!

mirabile_dictu January 30 2010, 18:33:10 UTC

Dunno who the woman is, but I loved this Radek! Anyone who can stand up to Rodney McKay for so many years would be just this confident -- and deservedly so. He's not only intelligent, he's wise. Thank you!

bironic January 31 2010, 02:00:15 UTC

Yes! I'm glad the characterization felt true to you here. It was great fun to explore the pairing and try looking out through Radek's eyes.

deelaundry January 31 2010, 00:10:20 UTC

How amazingly satisfying. Conflict and strife have their place, too, but it is so nice to have a scene of peace, confidence, and enjoyment. I am very happy you gave this to both Radek and Remy!

Awesome!

bironic January 31 2010, 02:00:56 UTC

Yay! 'twas great fun to try these two. So glad you liked.

wpadmirer February 2 2010, 02:47:36 UTC

Very nice. I'm sure Zelenka would please any woman.

WP

bironic February 2 2010, 02:56:31 UTC

Thanks! I'd like to think that's the case. I never did get the 'everybody hates Radek' thing the show writers were always talking about - he seems perfectly lovely to me!