Geoffrey had, in fact, known priests-a couple of them biblically-who were more in touch with their sexuality than Chuck was.
I never knew what the phrase “bark of laughter” referred to until reading this line. That is a True Story.
Okay, I'll protect your lies; I'll hide here; I won't ask you to come with me to the carnival or meet me in the park before nightfall. I'll spend holidays alone or-if you can swing it-I'll meet you for ten minutes in the convenience store restroom after you've convinced your family you forgot to buy something that is absolutely essential for the perfect holiday dinner. I'll sneak around in basements and boiler rooms and back alleys in the middle of the night, neglecting my students, my sleep, my personal safety. I'll willfully smash public lighting and press my bare back against cold, wet brick walls, and I'll keep my voice to a whisper, be careful not to mark your skin, and bite my lip till it bleeds when I want to cry out your name. I'll be your dirty little secret, I won't ask for more, and I'll
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I would say that this comment is very lovely feedback, is what I would say. :)
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I had to laugh out loud when you said:
oh Chuck. Baby. How long did you practice that one in front of the mirror?
because I just bet he does practice the things he knows Geoffrey would like to hear in front of the mirror, and I bet he very rarely manages to actually use them anyway. :)
Many Months after the fact
anonymous
August 7 2009, 04:34:24 UTC
Oh my god... I don't normally comment on fan fiction, but damn. This is beautiful, sexy and romantic! It's so amazing how this can come out of a crass (but hilarious!!) comedy show and fit so well. I'm... I'm just impressed. I was hooked the whole way through, this is a fantastic take on the characters, and very well written. Thank You! D.
I have been looking for Chuck/Geoffrey fan fiction all over the Internet and couldn't believe I stumbled upon this. THIS.IS.SO.FANTASTIC!! I LOVED IT! Your third person narrative voice is simply amazing and flows so well.
Hey, thanks! ^_^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it. There isn't a lot of fic out there for these lovely fellas, so I'm happy to have my little offering in. :)
God, it hurts... I don't wanna make you feel bad, but - I can't even say it's in a good way. I always thought it's kinda fun to try to take these two seriously, but this - this is way too real, and dark, and hopeless. I had no idea. Poor bastards. They're so stuck. And given that premise of SWC that there's no character development (until the last ep that is, where even that cruel universe seemed to have changed its mind - since Jerri learned the right lesson for a while) - given that, there's no way out... I'm gonna go cry now.
PS. Your language is fantastic, it's effortless, it flows. Well done ;)
I just saw this practically a year late. Very sorry for the delay in response, but I am sorry to have hurt you! Yet glad to have caused a strong reaction. ;)
Thank you for your comments, and sorry again for such a long wait for a response.
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I never knew what the phrase “bark of laughter” referred to until reading this line. That is a True Story.
Okay, I'll protect your lies; I'll hide here; I won't ask you to come with me to the carnival or meet me in the park before nightfall. I'll spend holidays alone or-if you can swing it-I'll meet you for ten minutes in the convenience store restroom after you've convinced your family you forgot to buy something that is absolutely essential for the perfect holiday dinner. I'll sneak around in basements and boiler rooms and back alleys in the middle of the night, neglecting my students, my sleep, my personal safety. I'll willfully smash public lighting and press my bare back against cold, wet brick walls, and I'll keep my voice to a whisper, be careful not to mark your skin, and bite my lip till it bleeds when I want to cry out your name. I'll be your dirty little secret, I won't ask for more, and I'll ( ... )
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Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I had to laugh out loud when you said:
oh Chuck. Baby. How long did you practice that one in front of the mirror?
because I just bet he does practice the things he knows Geoffrey would like to hear in front of the mirror, and I bet he very rarely manages to actually use them anyway. :)
Thanks again!
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I'm... I'm just impressed. I was hooked the whole way through, this is a fantastic take on the characters, and very well written.
Thank You!
D.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks very much for taking the time to comment; it makes my day! :)
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I always thought it's kinda fun to try to take these two seriously, but this - this is way too real, and dark, and hopeless.
I had no idea.
Poor bastards. They're so stuck.
And given that premise of SWC that there's no character development (until the last ep that is, where even that cruel universe seemed to have changed its mind - since Jerri learned the right lesson for a while) - given that, there's no way out...
I'm gonna go cry now.
PS. Your language is fantastic, it's effortless, it flows. Well done ;)
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Thank you for your comments, and sorry again for such a long wait for a response.
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