This is so perfectly wonderful! What a mix of emotions you made me go through. I don't remember the last time I teared up reading a fic, but I teared up reading this one. This was a very compelling story. ♥ Thank you writing and sharing. :-)
I love your Kirk prime and Spock prime - two fully realized characters with a sweet and heartbreaking relationship. I'm so glad they finally get to be together.
And AOS Kirk and Spock too. I loved the way you handled Kirk's grief and his unrequited feelings, and how Spock was willing to meet him halfway. Maybe they won't repeat their counterparts' mistakes.
Awesome job, awesome story, thank you so much for sharing.
This is fantastic! The plot was lovely and complex and more than interesting enough to keep my attention. I think i'm most impressed, though, by your characters, and your ability to keep 2 Kirks and 2 Spocks completely distinct. Never once was I confused about who was speaking, and you really nailed their voices and personalities. Excellent job!
Ah, a cringer! :) You know, I can watch the goriest things on earth without cringing, but if you so much as punch a character I love, I go apeshit, so I'm glad there was payoff in those bits that were hard to write. Thanks for reading!
The villain here was spectacular. Seriously, she was absolutely horrifying. In terms of finding a way to bring Kirk Prime and Spock back to life, you picked the least rainbows and butterflies way to go...I wouldn't have it any other way!! The stunning plot made the story what it was: equal parts horror, scifi, romance, drama, etc. This was simply a good example of writing :) And I will love you forever for reuniting Kirk and Spock Prime, fyi.
XD Thank you! And man, I never choose the easy way, and sometimes I wish I did because it's certainly less stressing to write, lol. But I'm so happy you enjoyed it and that's a big payoff.
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This was a very compelling story. ♥ Thank you writing and sharing. :-)
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I love your Kirk prime and Spock prime - two fully realized characters with a sweet and heartbreaking relationship. I'm so glad they finally get to be together.
And AOS Kirk and Spock too. I loved the way you handled Kirk's grief and his unrequited feelings, and how Spock was willing to meet him halfway. Maybe they won't repeat their counterparts' mistakes.
Awesome job, awesome story, thank you so much for sharing.
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The villain here was spectacular. Seriously, she was absolutely horrifying. In terms of finding a way to bring Kirk Prime and Spock back to life, you picked the least rainbows and butterflies way to go...I wouldn't have it any other way!! The stunning plot made the story what it was: equal parts horror, scifi, romance, drama, etc. This was simply a good example of writing :) And I will love you forever for reuniting Kirk and Spock Prime, fyi.
Wonderful job!
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