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SPN fic: Fire in the Hole 7/9 (Part Two)

Aug 16, 2007 17:03

Fire in the Hole, 7/9 (Part Two)

Chapter 7/Wizard (Part Two)

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quellefromage August 16 2007, 22:02:06 UTC

AIIIEEEEEEE!!! * Makes incoherent babbling sounds.*

Oh...crap. Fire demons...Vegas...John, that sonofabitch, Bobby...oh...Bobby.

the Tommyknockers rule.

Sasquatchme and Lemmy...beta like the WIND!!!

Oh man, you sure know how to put the hurt on. Yikes.

big_pink August 17 2007, 18:42:31 UTC

Trouble with the betas at the moment is that they're BUSY. I know! The nerve! I had to HARASS poor old JM to cough it up because she was prepping a script or some such thing. It was sad really.

I still don't see how that's bacon.

*is unconvinced*

tabaqui August 16 2007, 22:24:15 UTC

OH, oh oh oh. I love this. The tommyknockers were *perfect*. Creepy and pitiful but also strong and *pissed* and dedicated to helping someone who had gifted them.

And Dean, thinking things through, seeing what his Dad is doing, might do...

Gods. I love it, as always, as usual. Hate it. Am a little confused on one point but then, my memory is awful so confusion is natural.

Oh, boys. Oh, oh *boys*.
*hugs them*
*luffs*

When my dad was a teen/young man in Tewksbury, Massachusetts, he and his brothers used to go to the Bucket of Blood bar. Heh.

big_pink August 17 2007, 18:47:22 UTC

OMG, I can't get enough of the Bucket of Blood. Go here and click onto the media gallery -- then to the Bucket of Blood, and you'll get the panorama. I never have to leave my easy chair, I tell ya.

Confused? Quite natural when it comes to this fic -- maybe I can clarify or maybe you've caught an error...it happens! Really!

tabaqui August 17 2007, 19:08:02 UTC

Oh, *man*, that is awesome. Awesome!! I love the colored glass lamp thingies and...all the pictures and stuff crammed onto the walls...

Damn neat.
:)

My confusion - basically due to bad memory - is do we actually know what happened in Vegas? I mean, yes, Dean fell, but there was something going *on* and have we been told *what* exactly yet, or have you simply been building up to it in stages and i am just confusing my*self*?

I don't want to *know*, i mean, if all will be revealed soon, of course i'll wait, but if you already said and are simply showing us in more detail every chapter, then please tell me what chapter to re-read.

Stupid brain.

big_pink August 17 2007, 19:14:34 UTC

So cool, eh? I love finding this stuff, just makes so much easier to write. And then I find stuff I'd never thought of, and then it finds its way into the fic and...this is why for me, the research always tells the story. You know? Thank god for the internet.

*pets your stupid brain*

No, I haven't actually SAID what happened in the Vegas parking garage. It's the Big Secret. I've dropped loads of hints -- we know that Dean fell and his dad feels guilty -- but there is of course, more going on than that and I've just taken an unconscionable amount of time to get there.

Unforgivable, really. I need a good editor. I probably could have told this story in one sentence.

But where's the fun in that? Answers in the last two chapters.

* is evol*

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minim_calibre August 16 2007, 23:05:49 UTC

(too tired for thought. shall just flail quietly, then.)

big_pink August 17 2007, 18:47:50 UTC

*pets you flailing quietly*

riverbella August 16 2007, 23:35:42 UTC

Not hating John so much this time as pitying him. The things he doesn't see. The blind spots.

This just keeps getting better and better (and worse and worse). I want to see the end and I'm gonna cry like a baby when it's over just because it's over, never mind all the pain in the story itself.

Bobby is just...is just...Bobby. God, I love the man.

And the Tommyknockers are amazing.

As are you.

big_pink August 17 2007, 18:49:49 UTC

"Not hating John so much this time as pitying him."

See? I knew we'd all get there eventually.

Thank you -- it's been a tough one to write and a tough one to keep all the bits straight with, but the payoff chapters are coming. I hope. Well, I KNOW they're coming, I just hope there's payoff. You know.

stele3 August 16 2007, 23:45:08 UTC

Okay, wtf happened in Vegas? 'Cause this shit is KILLING me, dammit!

John just finds new ways to fuck up, and Dean finds new ways to BE fucked up. God, the two of them.

big_pink August 17 2007, 18:51:06 UTC

It's coming, it's coming. Sheesh. You'd think you didn't like a good cliffhanger, eh? John is just deliriously screwed up, it's like cooking with gas. You just spark him up and watch him burn.