Wowww this is an amazing fic~ I love how you described each and every relationship Jongup had built up in the past, the different ways he treats his team and then the description about him being in love with Junhong and sasddffgghhjj the realization of junhong = apocalypse. asdfgghh plot twist ftw~ I'm so incoherent right now I can't even type straight. ugh I also love the pairings, i love their dynamics, afddfghgbhjjasadcvgbn and the ending was perfect ;A;
ahaha thanks! Your incoherency is flattering xD ♥ I'm glad you liked the pairings/their dynamics! I tried to make them each distinct/etc. I'm glad you liked the ending too, I was afraid I should have written like an epilogue or something, but I am also thinking of some other stories in this verse (that might not actually happen due to my torturously slow writing) so I decided not to. Thanks for reading and letting me know how you feel about it ^^♥
this is a really cool supernatural/fantasy story was the prompt asking for that kind of genre? i like what you did with it - it's very intriguing. i'm guessing the world they live in is sort of messed up? that's what i garnered from the story because there are leagues of people with powers fighting off stuff and there are destroyed cities and stuff. and taking kids away from their families at age 5, man that's messed up. poor jongup. there's so much going on i think i missed things in my reading ahhh
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I'm so sorry about the lateness of this reply, I was so seriously blown away by it and had no idea how to respond so I'm forcing myself to now. Your analysis of everything pointed out everything I was iffy about, cause I didn't have much time to develop it, like the messed up world and government. Also how little I described the setting. Haha also the marking as a kinda wedding ring yeap, in my head it traces out the ring finger vein xD
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omg i had no idea my comment was unintentionally analyzing your piece (those were just some things I picked up on and had questions about ;;;;;; i'm trying to leave more insightful comments to authors by asking questions to engage conversation) your mentioning that it made you think about some spots you wished you'd developed more reminds me of how sometimes i wish i could go back to some stories i've written and expand things (bc i liked the plot and wish i'd done better justice to the idea
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ohh if you're trying to engage in conversation that's great! I always feel like I'm being a bother when I reply? Haha xD but if you're welcoming it then I will probably ramble more at you~ (this is also why I was asking you about twitter, cause it seems so much easier to get to know people and it's ok to be spammy...xD) but man, it's so cool to hear some of this writer stuff and have affirmation that it's not just going on in my head
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Spot. I'm kind of useless right now, but oh gosh, this is the most wonderful story <3 It might be my favorite superpower story I've ever read. Jongup and Junhong's romance is so sweet and innocent and just - it's so perfect.
This was so... pretty <3 I really liked how you showed us Jongup's growth through his worries and everything (lost puppy finding himself XD) and his romance with Junhong was so natural <33 And really superhero-B.A.P has got to be the best! Especially when you got the group dynamics so nicely (and accurately) mapped out. Really great job, thank you so much for writing this! <3 :')
ah I'm glad you thought the dynamics were accurate and that the Jonglo was natural (I tend to have trouble writing anything non-Daejae lol) thank you so much for reading and commenting ^^ ♥
ok this is me, starting my comment, because i've read your story twice now and i keep being like OK NOW IS THE TIME I WILL COMMENT and then i just stare at your fic and realise i am so completely overwhelmed by the awesome that i don't know where to start.
so, first thing: i love that it's from jongup's point of view. like, i don't know if it's just because he's so weird or what, but it seem really difficult to get into his head -- it helps that the members themselves say they can't figure out what actual jongup is thinking, and they live with him -- but i feel like this isn't something you see all that often, much less in really long, plot-driven fics that are as involved as this one is. (is that weird and possibly totally untrue? yeah, i dunno, but it seems that way to me, so there you go, lol.) i love the way you've written jongup here -- it totally serves as an explanation for his weird speech and behaviour, because to him, it isn't weird. it seems perfectly logical to him, and the way you've chosen to describe that makes it seem
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I HIT THE COMMENT CHARACTER LIMIT, WHAT??? THAT'S A THING? HOW WHAT
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the part where they finally confess is really sweet. they're both such odd kids, lol, idk, i felt like it fit well.
“I guess it means I belong to you and you belong to me.”
Junhong seems to like this idea. He closes his eyes and snuggles closer to Jongup. “So if I get lost or go…far away, you’ll always be able to find me?”
i love that those are their lines about it -- like that's what it means to them. it's so perf ;________; this is totally getting away from me and getting really super long but i also wanted to mention that i really REALLY like your power choices for them -- you don't usually see some of those, so i was impressed. <3 i saw your explanation about them (i think in another comment? idk idk) and that's so great Q____Q seriously, that was probably my favourite part about the fic. you used different powers than you usually see in this kind of thing, and you worked their powers so
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JIIIIN ;AAA; ♥ I was pretty overwhelmed by this comment (you can tell by the amount of time it took me to reply xD) I am so so glad the Jongup point of view worked for you, cause frankly I had no idea what I was doing, Jongup is such an enigma...an amazing one, but an enigma nonetheless ♥ there just seems to be so many things he's unsure about, but the few things he's sure of he's passionate about, precious child <333
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oooh i'm so loving the gifs too. Great work!
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so, first thing: i love that it's from jongup's point of view. like, i don't know if it's just because he's so weird or what, but it seem really difficult to get into his head -- it helps that the members themselves say they can't figure out what actual jongup is thinking, and they live with him -- but i feel like this isn't something you see all that often, much less in really long, plot-driven fics that are as involved as this one is. (is that weird and possibly totally untrue? yeah, i dunno, but it seems that way to me, so there you go, lol.) i love the way you've written jongup here -- it totally serves as an explanation for his weird speech and behaviour, because to him, it isn't weird. it seems perfectly logical to him, and the way you've chosen to describe that makes it seem ( ... )
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gonna be quick about this then, sorry, BACK TO THE COMMENT
the part where they finally confess is really sweet. they're both such odd kids, lol, idk, i felt like it fit well.
“I guess it means I belong to you and you belong to me.”
Junhong seems to like this idea. He closes his eyes and snuggles closer to Jongup. “So if I get lost or go…far away, you’ll always be able to find me?”
i love that those are their lines about it -- like that's what it means to them. it's so perf ;________; this is totally getting away from me and getting really super long but i also wanted to mention that i really REALLY like your power choices for them -- you don't usually see some of those, so i was impressed. <3 i saw your explanation about them (i think in another comment? idk idk) and that's so great Q____Q seriously, that was probably my favourite part about the fic. you used different powers than you usually see in this kind of thing, and you worked their powers so ( ... )
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