[Hetalia] [Netherlands/Indonesia] Freedom (Prologue/?)
Title : Freedom (Prologue/?)
Word Count : 1240
Rating : PG-13 (probably higher in later chapters :P)
Pairing : Netherlands x Indonesia
Notes : OH, IDEK. A historical fanfic from a girl who doesn't know much about history. But I tried hard, so there.
Disclaimer : Hetalia and Netherlands belongs to Himaruya Hidekazu. Indonesia is an OC for now so he ( Read more... )
Word Count : 1240
Rating : PG-13 (probably higher in later chapters :P)
Pairing : Netherlands x Indonesia
Notes : OH, IDEK. A historical fanfic from a girl who doesn't know much about history. But I tried hard, so there.
Disclaimer : Hetalia and Netherlands belongs to Himaruya Hidekazu. Indonesia is an OC for now so he ( Read more... )
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Okay, I'm done :D. You have no idea how this fic erased my "I hate Monday" mood. Incidentally, the last three paragraphs were my favourites. Indonesia's first (well, accidental) murder, brr...Makes me wonder about his future relationship with his people.
Butuh beta reader-kah? /menawarkan diri. Kebetulan aku juga lagi latihan nulis cerita pake bahasa Inggris. It's not really that easy D8, at least I've tried my best
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Ya Tuhan ternyata malah ketemu sesama Arema, aku jadi kaget 8D Kuliah dimana, mbak? Ambil jurusan apa?
O jadi fic ini dwibahasa ya? Aku malah ga bisa kalo suruh nulis satu cerita dalam 2 bahasa yg beda wkkk. Some, err, stuff in our mother tongue just cannot match the English equivalents. Biasanya aku banyak nulis cerpen original pake bahasa Indo, fanfic pake English. Mungkin karena fandom di LJ kebanyakan isinya English-speakers, plus nulis fanfic sendiri ga gitu dikenal di Indo. So yeah.
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Aku kuliah di UGM. Ambil jurusan Psikologi. Belum kelar2 juga nih ;___; Kamu sendiri?
Tadinya rencananya cuma nulis fanfic ini pake English, tapi ternyata waktu masuk forum Hetalia Indonesia, banyak banget yang sengaja masuk ke forum itu soalnya gak paham bahasa Inggris. Padahal pengen banget nge-share fanfic tentang Indonesia-kun sama sesama fans Hetalia Indonesia gitu deh. Aku juga baru sekali ini nulis fanfic pake bahasa Indonesia kok. Di Fanfiction.Net juga ada beberapa fanfic Netherland/Indo yang bagus. Indonesianya ada yang cowok ada yang cewek. Coba aja baca2 di sana.
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I MISS YOU.
And, someone was just telling me about this anime 15 minutes ago. I kid you not.
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THE SIWON TO MY DONGHAE
THE INYOUNG TO MY TOUYA
THE CHOW FUN TO MY COLA (wtf?)
I MISS YOU TOOOOOOOOOOO
LOL, it seems like even though we don't communicate much the fate still holds us together (again, wtf?)
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And yes, the threads of fate keep us intertwined xD I love how sappy we get around each other.
I MISS YOU.
SIWON MISSES DONGHAE.
INYOUNG MISSES TOUYA (LIKE CRAZY).
MY COLA MISSES YOUR CHOW FUN? o.0
I don't know if I can be a full-time beta reader, and I see you've just snagged yourself one, but just for this prologue:
It shouldn't had bothered him this much.
It shouldn't bother him this much.
Japan, whose short three years of occupation left nothing but bitter taste in his mouth and scars all over his body.
Japan, whose three short years of occupation left nothing but a bitter taste in his mouth and scars all over his body.
... that didn’t concern Indonesia into his doorstep.
... that didn't concern Indonesia to his doorstep.
Each with their own thoughts.
Each with his own thoughts.
The people that was imprisoned by Dutch imperialism.
The people that were imprisoned by Dutch imperialism.
So it must had been the best for him too."...it's Eka."
"... It's Eka."
The beasts, despite their fierce- ( ... )
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And my last mistake made me ROLF-ed so hard. Thank God you found that one XDDDDD
I love the parts you like too. The (accidental) murder was meant to show how different a nation mind's work compared to a normal human. I feel bad for doing that to Indonesia :< And the second, I want to show how beautiful my country is despite its flaws. AND YES I LOVE MY COUNTRY SO MUCH LKFHSJKLDGAHLSJKGALJ!!!!
I'M TOO LAZY TO LOG ON TO AIM BECAUSE IT GAVE ME LOTS OF TROUBLE LATELY SO WE SHOULD JUST TALK LIKE THIS. BETTER THAN NOTHING, RITE?!
*GROMPS AGAIN*
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