[Hetalia] [Netherlands/Indonesia] Freedom (Prologue/?)

May 16, 2010 00:03

Title : Freedom (Prologue/?)
Word Count : 1240
Rating : PG-13 (probably higher in later chapters :P)
Pairing : Netherlands x Indonesia
Notes : OH, IDEK. A historical fanfic from a girl who doesn't know much about history. But I tried hard, so there.
Disclaimer : Hetalia and Netherlands belongs to Himaruya Hidekazu. Indonesia is an OC for now so he ( Read more... )

character: netherlands, series: freedom, pairing: netherlands/indonesia, character: indonesia, fandom: hetalia

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jasmedra May 17 2010, 03:58:51 UTC
RHEE RHEE RHEE.
I MISS YOU.

And, someone was just telling me about this anime 15 minutes ago. I kid you not.

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skadihelias May 17 2010, 07:37:28 UTC
DEDRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
THE SIWON TO MY DONGHAE
THE INYOUNG TO MY TOUYA
THE CHOW FUN TO MY COLA (wtf?)
I MISS YOU TOOOOOOOOOOO

LOL, it seems like even though we don't communicate much the fate still holds us together (again, wtf?)

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jasmedra May 17 2010, 16:58:35 UTC
LOLOL. CHOW FUN TO YOUR COLA.
And yes, the threads of fate keep us intertwined xD I love how sappy we get around each other.

I MISS YOU.
SIWON MISSES DONGHAE.
INYOUNG MISSES TOUYA (LIKE CRAZY).
MY COLA MISSES YOUR CHOW FUN? o.0

I don't know if I can be a full-time beta reader, and I see you've just snagged yourself one, but just for this prologue:

It shouldn't had bothered him this much.
It shouldn't bother him this much.

Japan, whose short three years of occupation left nothing but bitter taste in his mouth and scars all over his body.
Japan, whose three short years of occupation left nothing but a bitter taste in his mouth and scars all over his body.

... that didn’t concern Indonesia into his doorstep.
... that didn't concern Indonesia to his doorstep.

Each with their own thoughts.
Each with his own thoughts.

The people that was imprisoned by Dutch imperialism.
The people that were imprisoned by Dutch imperialism.

So it must had been the best for him too."...it's Eka."
"... It's Eka."

The beasts, despite their fierce- ( ... )

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skadihelias May 17 2010, 18:16:35 UTC
EDITED! Thank you so much, bb ;_________; *GROMPS*

And my last mistake made me ROLF-ed so hard. Thank God you found that one XDDDDD

I love the parts you like too. The (accidental) murder was meant to show how different a nation mind's work compared to a normal human. I feel bad for doing that to Indonesia :< And the second, I want to show how beautiful my country is despite its flaws. AND YES I LOVE MY COUNTRY SO MUCH LKFHSJKLDGAHLSJKGALJ!!!!

I'M TOO LAZY TO LOG ON TO AIM BECAUSE IT GAVE ME LOTS OF TROUBLE LATELY SO WE SHOULD JUST TALK LIKE THIS. BETTER THAN NOTHING, RITE?!

*GROMPS AGAIN*

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jasmedra May 18 2010, 01:03:45 UTC
Oops, I just realized there was a mistake in my comment before. So there should be this there:
So it must had been the best for him too.
So it must be the best for him too.

And .____. No AIM? Is there a way to re-install it or something? Talking like this really doesn't compare to talking on AIM.

*GROMPS AND CLINGS FOREVER*

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