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[Super Junior] [Kibum/Donghae] When Donghae Wants to be on Top

Jan 17, 2009 00:18

Title : When Donghae Wants to be on Top
Theme : Donghae bottoming from the top.
Word Count : 2459
Rating : NC-17
Pairing : Kibum x Donghae
Notes : Written for mulkkogi's request at SM Town SmutMeme. This is my first attempt at PWP. I'm so ashamed at myself and I think I broke my brain writing this.
Disclaimer : They belong to each other and Lee Soo Man.
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pairing: kibum/donghae, fandom: super junior, character: kibum, character: donghae

Comments 34

penipenpen January 16 2009, 17:39:44 UTC

reading this first before going to sleep. :D

penipenpen January 16 2009, 18:12:16 UTC

Oh great! incoherency alert! XP
KiHae is such a tease!! Definitely! Hahaha.

Hae never listens, ne? LOL.
*will I be able to sleep now? haha.*

HOT.♥

skadihelias January 16 2009, 20:05:15 UTC

Hae fails so hard in life. LOL.

Thank you ♥

penipenpen January 17 2009, 08:10:12 UTC

Total FAIL!!! HAHAHAHA.
*coughsequelcough* LOL.

I read it again today. ^____^
I died, yet again.

Thread 6

emda January 16 2009, 18:55:01 UTC

Hot Hot Hot!!!!!!

skadihelias January 16 2009, 20:04:26 UTC

XD

Because the boys are just too hot :3

freedomthisway January 16 2009, 19:36:34 UTC

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLROFLLMFAO~!!!!

Really, if it's not in the middle of the night I would've choked myself to death with laughter. LOLOLOL

Now I know how you feel when you read my smut KiHae story. Reading a smut story written by your bestfriend is a little bit like reading how your parents have sex at night. xDDDD Kinda gross, but still amusing nonetheless. LOLOLOL

Oh, and Rhee, you can't believe how hard it is to stifle my laugh when I see you're using SOUND EFFECT! <^0^>

"K-Kibumm..ie...ahn!" Donghae panted, fingers and hand moving faster. "P-please... Help...me... Mnn!" He was shaking uncotrollably by then.

You wrote a dirty smutty slutty and HOT KiHae! You~! A person who can't even watch gay porn properly~! xDDDDDD ( ... )

skadihelias January 16 2009, 19:39:23 UTC

OH FUCK YOU WHY ARE YOU HERE?!

*RUNS OFF TO BURY MYSELF IN THE BACKYARD*

freedomthisway January 16 2009, 19:43:23 UTC

LOLOLOL

*Digging you out*

It's okay, Rhee darling. I know that deep down, you actually have that dirty smexy passion that burns and burns and is waiting to soar out of your body.

Rraaawwwwrrr...~!

*giggling and chuckling to death*

skadihelias January 16 2009, 19:49:44 UTC

CRYING

SHIT I WANT TO DIE NOW PLEASE KILL ME NOW I TOTALLY FORGOT THAT YOU EXIST IN THIS UNIVERSE FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU

DON'T QUOTE MY FIC BACK TO ME, YOU SICK FUCK! I'M EMBARASSED MYSELF ENOUGH WRITING THIS! DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I HAD TO BANG MY HEAD TO THE TABLE BECAUSE I WAS UNABLE TO SEE MY OWN FIC?!

And no, actually I haven't downloaded Jporn by myself. Did you forget about my connection speed? Or my unability to watch gayporn? No, I just have a very detailed and overactive imagination.

Damn, this fic actually looks okay to me before you come and quote the most embarassing part to me. How can I ever see you again in the future?

Thread 8

fadedandinsane January 16 2009, 19:48:24 UTC

dead. dead. dead.

♥

skadihelias January 16 2009, 20:03:42 UTC

LOL

I'm sorry?

fadedandinsane January 16 2009, 20:14:23 UTC

no don't be sorry. it's a gud thang i swear.

it's just that kihae!smut leaves me braindead. yes. XDD

skadihelias January 18 2009, 04:45:29 UTC

It left the writer braindead too *facepalm*

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skadihelias January 18 2009, 04:38:52 UTC

Thanks~~

And Hae, LOL, he's a slut ;]