Chocolate - Part Twelve

Sep 21, 2007 22:30

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin, Shige×Kusano
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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potetofurai September 22 2007, 05:00:55 UTC
First???

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potetofurai September 22 2007, 05:02:52 UTC
YAY~! I am first~!!

okay so I actually haven't been following this fic the whole time...cept it was recomened to me so i was like..okay. So I read the first 11 chapters in one go like...a week ago. WAAA~!! I just couldn't stop reading~!!

I loved the ending...it made me feel so warm and fuzzy.

Great Job on this fic~!!

^^

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biancamasuda September 22 2007, 06:10:59 UTC
Yay! A new commenter! I love you guys <333

The ending of the chapter?

I'm not sure if that's what you meant...BUT THIS FIC ISN'T DONE YET.

BUT I'M GLAD YOU GOT ALL WARM AND FUZZY.

THANKS FOR READING.

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potetofurai September 22 2007, 16:51:48 UTC
yeah sorry..the end of the chapter...long week..no brain..yeah~! ^^

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yuyamassu September 22 2007, 05:04:09 UTC
Oh!
Shigeaki took Masuda back!!!
Yay!!

I was so scared they wouldn't meet each other~*phew*

I feel sad for Hironori...
He's all alone now...T___T

I so love this chapter!
Shigeaki & Masuda get back together & because Jin didn't appearXDD

I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!^^

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biancamasuda September 22 2007, 14:13:00 UTC
I KNOW. WHAT A GOOD COINCIDENCE.

They are so romantic.

I feel sooo bad for Kusano too...but it's not done, so maybe he can be happy too =DDDDD.

You know, I think you're one of the few that realized IT'S NOT FINISHED.

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yuyamassu September 22 2007, 14:22:37 UTC
*Nods*
I hope that Kusano will be happy too!^_^

Maybe it's because the ending seems like the whole fic has already ended~
But you actually wrote that there will still be another chapter right?

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biancamasuda September 22 2007, 14:33:09 UTC
In my opinion, it seems so UNFINISHED. But that could just be because I write this fic =).

Yeah I DID write! Some people don't read my A/N's I think. HAHAHA.

Oh well. I edited it and mentioned that it isn't done.

It's almost making me upset that people think that! There are so many other characters to deal with!

Anyway, your comments are fab <333

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quinnsan September 22 2007, 05:04:53 UTC
Aww~ I'm so glad they finally found each other, it would've been really sad if they hadn't run into each other all. I'm looking forward to the next chapter~ ^^

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biancamasuda September 22 2007, 14:14:22 UTC
I know! Can you imagine if they didn't get to see each other before Christmas?!

What would happen! I just NEEDED them to find each other. It's almost kind of excruciating to write when they're not together.

I did create how they were after all =D.

Thanks for reading =)!!!

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quinnsan September 26 2007, 21:14:46 UTC
It would've been heart-breaking if they hadn't been able to see each other before christmas. D= I know I'd be sad if I had a boyfriend and couldn't see him before christmas.

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biancamasuda September 22 2007, 14:17:18 UTC
HOLY SHOOT. YOU'RE THE AWESOME ONE.

HAHAHA OH MAN. YOUR COMMENT MADE ME SPAZZ OUT IN MY CHAIR.

It really was corny. CORNY STUFF IS SO GOOD FOR SOME REASON. IT'S SO CORNY, IT'S ACTUALLY KIND OF GOOD IN A WAY. HAHAHAHAHA.

DECAPITATED IT AND KICKED ITS INANIMATE BALLS AND LEFT IT TO DROWN BEFORE CREMATING THE WORD AWESOME?! HOLY SHIIIEEETT. YOU'RE SO FREAKIN' COOL.

And NO, of course not. If it was the end, I would say so.

It can't just end there! What about Jin! What about Kusano! What about Ohkura! EVEN KOKI. Hahaha <3

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biancamasuda September 23 2007, 06:07:30 UTC
SPAZZING IS THE BEST. I spaz like crazy too. WE CAN SPAZ TOGETHER.

OHKURA×KOKI?! WHAT THE FREAKIN' HELL?!?!?! I'MMA DO IT. HAHAHAHA.

I'LL TRY MY HARDEST NOT TO TAKE AS LONG AGAIN.

I don't know why I took so long. I just had so much going on.

But I think it'll only be around a week, as usual. As opposed to almost 3!

<333

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ceylon_miko September 22 2007, 05:48:21 UTC
I spazed when I seen this chapter was up. *_*

omg yes! Massu and Shige are back together! <3 Aww though I do feel bad for Kusano. He took it rather well. Kusano dear, just go out with Ohkura or whoever so you can be happy

I'll be waiting for the new chapter!

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biancamasuda September 22 2007, 14:23:30 UTC
YOU SPAZED?

I spazed writing it. Seriously. I haven't written in so long...I was almost deprived!

Yeah, Kusano is seriously such a sweetheart. That's what makes it worse! If he was a total asshole we'd all be like "WOOHOO."

But now we just all feel guilty and sad. Well *I* do anyway hahaha.

OMFG. KUSANO×OHKURA?! SHOULD I?! AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA. DON'T TEMPT ME!

Thanks for reading <333

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ceylon_miko September 23 2007, 04:08:01 UTC
I spaz over fics I like naturally :)

I dunno I feel heartbreak can be fixed with new love. Though I do enjoy putting ideas into people's heads XDD

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biancamasuda September 23 2007, 06:10:04 UTC
No, of course!

I want everyone to have someone. Even Jin. But we'll see. I have this reputation of having sad/horrible endings. At least it's not a fic where I can kill people.

I seem to love having people die in fics. I'm just...I don't know...it's like my style!?

But this one really doesn't have the kind of plot for people to die. SO LET'S HAVE EVERYONE FIND LOVE. WOOHOO. =D

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