#43 Theme 43: Son of Bitch - Miyavi; Tora/Hiroto

[beyondtheremix]

Title: An Adventure
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 043 Son of Bitch (Miyavi)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto if you squint
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, slight violence
Comment: I meant to finish this for Halloween :(

Comments

[invisiblehabits]

You seriously are too good a writer to post so few stories! Haha, your writing is just amazing! The way you can take an everyday situation, such as a freaking bus ride, and write it in such detail it feels real but not boring... And here I'm talking about the bus ride before the driver went crazy! I'd say that takes some skills, and you've got those skills alright!

That said, this is positively THE MEANEST ending in a long time! And not only because you likely killed them, but because if you did I didn't get to know! LOL! Clearly I'm perfectly sane and normal for wanting the agonising angst in knowing they managed to overpower the bus driver only to meet their deaths. XD

Good story is good though! I like the ending, even though it's a mean cliffhanger without continuation to come, because it points out the fact everyday heroes don't always make it. If they live, they're most likely severely injured; you don't crash through a windshield and walk away from it just like that... So yes, good story! You should write more! :D

[beyondtheremix]

You flatter me way too much D:! The ending kind of just happened, but I really just wanted to write something of the bus ride from HELLLLL. I have no idea what to say other than I just came back from watching Harry Potter and it was good!!!!

Oh man, Harry Potter. I want to reread all those books again because I read them all but had NO CLUE what was supposed to be happening in the Deathly Hallows LOL. *flails more* My mom hasn't read a single one and she cried a bit at Dobby D:!

ANYWAY, pointless rambling! Thanks for reading!

[invisiblehabits]

I only flatter when flattering is deserved! You, my dear, deserve to be flattered!

I should go watch it, the Deathly Hallows I mean. Haha, I must say I'm quite proud of the fact I figured out one of the major Deathly Hallow's details already in...oh I don't even remember if it's in Half-Blood Prince or Order of the Phoenix the horcruxes are first mentioned. People laughed at me and called me crazy, I happily yelled "TOLD YOU SO!" in the end. Hehe.

Dobby... *sniffs*

[beyondtheremix]

Hohoho go watch! It's goo :)

I honestly couldn't stop staring at Ron's massive thighs and torso DDDD: LOL

[k435y]

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh?????? O_O
It really, really stops there?! >___<;;
I found it almost funny how Tora basically told him his life story when he was trying to "calm" him down. LOL.
This was...interesting. XD
Thank you for sharing. =)

[beyondtheremix]

Yeahhhhhhhhh, it really does stop there! D: *sweats*

Tora was trying to gain his trust! Introduce himself or something, but he was doing it wrong! LOL. I'm glad you thought it was... interesting! LOLOLOLOL

Thanks for reading! :)))

[bellcheria]

SO. MOOD. ITS IN THA HOUSE MA'AM. I can finally read your story *_________* *skitters of and reads*

*lolling and squealing at the beginning* Omg xDDDD
And good, I pictured Little Boy Hiroto being Flamingly Blond. Nice <3

*listening to this with Sleepwalker and High&Low on repeat* Its soooo fitting it scares me

Miss can I just say, I think you're the only one in the WORLD who makes reading about a >i>bus so fucking awesome.

I hope I have told you this before, but maybe I can bring it out in different words: You are one of the most captivating WRITERS ever lived. Your fics could proudly stand next to Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl books. Page turning is the wrong word, but Page SCROLLING you have me every day. Damn damn damn...Anthills omg *dies*

I feel Little Hiroto right there...Isn't it STUPID that, whenever you want to check someone out, THEY LOOK AT YOU AS WELL??????????? Creepy, just EERIE. Downright macabry!! >///<

Love love LOVING THIS!!! heavy combat boots, rolled up jeans and thick hoodie Isn't it great how Nico² shows

[beyondtheremix]

LONG COMMENT *FLAILS*

It's so long LOL. But I get your reaction to every part of the story LOLOLOLOL. I kind of do the same too, just in case I forget something I wanted to say, but WHOA LOL. LONG COMMENT!

Sometimes I really get in the mood for writing something scary but then it usually dies like it did halfway with this one and the other one with the ghost D: Then I have to struggle to finish the story, but I'm always glad I post them :)!

Thanks for reading! LOL SORRY THERE IS AN OPEN ENDING! I didn't want to ruin the fun and tell you what happened hahahaa. Let you come up with something yourselves! AND NOOOO I WILL NOT SEQUEL THIS LOLOLOL I fail at getting sequels out. They take me MONTHS D:

[bellcheria]

YES!!! LONG AND HUGE-ISH AND MAGNIFICENT!!!

yeah xDD; I always want to make sure that the writer gets how they made me feel with some parts...but sometimes there are SO many parts I need to leave my comment on ;W;

Noooooooooo I thought it out myself that night!! I was like, Tora crouching on hands and knees to Hiroto, who slowly wakes up. The police comes around and they both loose unconsciousnes (holding hands btw).
Later, Hiro wakes up slowwwwly in the hospital, making out a tall figure at his bedside. Tora is getting his head stitched and is holding Hiroto's hand. The small on is squeezing it, eyes opening slooowwlly *because the crazy light is ALWAYS SO FUCKING BRIGHT*. Tora explains what happened, that they are safe bla bla bla.
*and the love story unfolds with exchanging numbers, coffee in the morning and stuff* <3

[beyondtheremix]

LMFAO I see I see.

I will let you keep that happy ending then, seeing as how I'm NEVER WRITING A SEQUEL!!! BUWAHAHAHA