#43 Theme 43: Son of Bitch - Miyavi; Tora/Hiroto

Nov 22, 2010 20:54

Title: An Adventure
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 043 Son of Bitch (Miyavi)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto if you squint
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, slight violence
Comment: I meant to finish this for Halloween :(

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

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bellcheria December 5 2010, 18:14:55 UTC
SO. MOOD. ITS IN THA HOUSE MA'AM. I can finally read your story *_________* *skitters of and reads*

*lolling and squealing at the beginning* Omg xDDDD
And good, I pictured Little Boy Hiroto being Flamingly Blond. Nice <3

*listening to this with Sleepwalker and High&Low on repeat* Its soooo fitting it scares me

Miss can I just say, I think you're the only one in the WORLD who makes reading about a >i>bus so fucking awesome.

I hope I have told you this before, but maybe I can bring it out in different words: You are one of the most captivating WRITERS ever lived. Your fics could proudly stand next to Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl books. Page turning is the wrong word, but Page SCROLLING you have me every day. Damn damn damn...Anthills omg *dies*

I feel Little Hiroto right there...Isn't it STUPID that, whenever you want to check someone out, THEY LOOK AT YOU AS WELL??????????? Creepy, just EERIE. Downright macabry!! >///<

Love love LOVING THIS!!! heavy combat boots, rolled up jeans and thick hoodie Isn't it great how Nico² shows us what kind of casual fashion they sport?? Loving it!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTT *has to stop again to write down her most insane comment ever*
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTT LIKE DUUUDEEE LIKE FUCK LIKE WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT
TORA
STOP
AMAZING ME
RIGHT NOW
OMFG HE TELLS HIM HE HAS TWO CATS AND PLAYS GUITAR WHAT KIND OF FREAK ARE YOU, TORA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *voiceless screaming here ok?*

*reads rampage and lolls her ass off* You gotta be KIDDING ME??? Little Boy Hiroto made someone as crazy as him?? BIG BOY TORA OR WHAT? *dies*

*is completly scared as she's sensing the crazy danger* Omg...this feels like that one story that was so unreal with Hiroto and Tora running from a ghost that set every building they went in on fire omgomgomgomgomg

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME *sputters in every now and then to give her thoughts*

....................................................................................................*IS DOTTING TO INFINITY AND BEYOND*
END THIS
PROPERLY
LIKE
THEY WAKING UP IN THE HOSPITAL AND BEING ALRIGHT
BUT
OMG
BUT
OMGGOGMGOMGOMGOGMGOMGOGMOGMGOMOGMOMGOGMG
QAQAQAQAQ TORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTO
TORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTOTORAHIROTO
*dies*

And no, I like your layout and letters and stuff QQ

BUT OMG OMGOMG

*reading through the other comments* Okay this is the end I just think up my own happy ending QQ

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beyondtheremix December 5 2010, 21:48:07 UTC
LONG COMMENT *FLAILS*

It's so long LOL. But I get your reaction to every part of the story LOLOLOLOL. I kind of do the same too, just in case I forget something I wanted to say, but WHOA LOL. LONG COMMENT!

Sometimes I really get in the mood for writing something scary but then it usually dies like it did halfway with this one and the other one with the ghost D: Then I have to struggle to finish the story, but I'm always glad I post them :)!

Thanks for reading! LOL SORRY THERE IS AN OPEN ENDING! I didn't want to ruin the fun and tell you what happened hahahaa. Let you come up with something yourselves! AND NOOOO I WILL NOT SEQUEL THIS LOLOLOL I fail at getting sequels out. They take me MONTHS D:

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bellcheria December 9 2010, 14:55:58 UTC
YES!!! LONG AND HUGE-ISH AND MAGNIFICENT!!!

yeah xDD; I always want to make sure that the writer gets how they made me feel with some parts...but sometimes there are SO many parts I need to leave my comment on ;W;

Noooooooooo I thought it out myself that night!! I was like, Tora crouching on hands and knees to Hiroto, who slowly wakes up. The police comes around and they both loose unconsciousnes (holding hands btw).
Later, Hiro wakes up slowwwwly in the hospital, making out a tall figure at his bedside. Tora is getting his head stitched and is holding Hiroto's hand. The small on is squeezing it, eyes opening slooowwlly *because the crazy light is ALWAYS SO FUCKING BRIGHT*. Tora explains what happened, that they are safe bla bla bla.
*and the love story unfolds with exchanging numbers, coffee in the morning and stuff* <3

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beyondtheremix December 9 2010, 16:23:13 UTC
LMFAO I see I see.

I will let you keep that happy ending then, seeing as how I'm NEVER WRITING A SEQUEL!!! BUWAHAHAHA

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