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Secret Eden - Ch.4

Sep 09, 2012 21:21

Title: Secret Eden.
Summary: Secret Eden. Have you heard of it? Probably not. You would most likely not know of it unless you were a child of a politician or a wealthy businessman or some young celebrity, venturing out in the world of luxury and vices.
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: Romance, Smut
Rating: NC17
Length: Chaptered

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( He was about to shout at the person who pulled him out, but stopped when his eyes bore into the deep almond ones staring at him with intensity. He knew those eyes…they were Jung Yunho’s. )

romance, yunjae, smut, nc17, secret eden, chapter 4, au

Comments 20

jaeftw September 9 2012, 13:59:21 UTC

wow, quite an eventful chapter we have here.
but i guess all their actions were justifiable. yunho, being his possessive self, did that to jae because of what jae was doing.
and i guess jae lost himself because it was his first time to drink and to go to clubs.
this is really interesting, now i'm wondering how will yunjae act towards each other in the next chapter (:

phinea2009 September 9 2012, 14:21:46 UTC

Jaejoong is finding out how far he can push the envelope.

I'm still wary of the rich boys.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

sujuhaebiased September 9 2012, 14:28:07 UTC

Really good !!! I'm liking the pase of the story!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!! Thanks for the update!

snow_meow September 9 2012, 15:50:14 UTC

I can understand the freedom that Jaejoong felt from that outing.
I just hope that he will not let it get to his head.
No matter what social class divides people.

I wonder how will YunJae's next meeting be like.

yunjaemrcn September 9 2012, 15:50:53 UTC

why r u not happy about this chap? i liked it NO! I LOVED IT!