Anniversary Blues

[betawho]

Title: Anniversary Blues
Author: betawho
Rating: R (for emotional intensity and some violence [no sex]. You have been warned.)
Characters: River Song, Jack Harkness, 11th Doctor
Words: 1,466

1968

"She's in there," the sweating man waved at the bar. "She's crazy! Unfortunately, she's also a good shot."

"What set her off?"

"Hell if I know," the little man

Comments

[elisi]

Oh break my heart, why don't you?

But gorgeous. Absolutely, wonderfully gorgeous, and perfect use of Jack and Silents. I'm going to come back to this one a lot.

[sofiawonderland]

This is so damn beautiful and heartbreaking.

And I absolutely adored the way you used Jack and the Silence and mixed and matched elements of canon and made it work so wonderfully.

[dqbunny]

That was the absolute perfect mixture of Silence and Jack. I love seeing your take on their friendship, and it about broke my heart as well. Granted, Jack might want to run before River realizes what he did!

[gidget_zb]

Awwwww :( But also YAY JACK.

[lonewytch]

This was lovely. Heartbreaking, but lovely. Great dialogue.