Folding Chair

Aug 04, 2012 14:40


Title: Folding Chair
Pairing: Jongkey, ninja!onho
Genre: Romance, fluff, au
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2700
Summary: Albinism is, in a word, gorgeous.

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jongkey, oneshot

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mikssi August 4 2012, 20:57:41 UTC
IT'S THIS ONE FJKLDSAJKLFDSJKAFDSA

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bestplace August 6 2012, 00:59:32 UTC
SURE IS.

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shineeowner August 4 2012, 21:40:18 UTC
spot

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photomusicart August 4 2012, 23:45:35 UTC
Oh god, I've never loved the word fascinating like this before xD
Nice excuse Jonghyun, well done......

I totally love the idea of Key with albinism. I think he'd actually look really pretty :3

And I just love how Jjong's constantly telling Key how beautiful he is. *sobs* why can't I have a man like that? T_T

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bestplace August 6 2012, 01:00:46 UTC
I like it, too. he would be pretty indeed. ^^

hahaha, we all want men like that. OTL

thank you for reading! ♥

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kim_play96 August 5 2012, 03:42:03 UTC
Spot :D

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kim_play96 August 5 2012, 08:22:16 UTC
I never thought the idea of key with albinism wud be this awesome. The parts at the beach were my favourites. U always write perfect jongkey. Keep up da good work. <3<3

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bestplace August 6 2012, 01:03:30 UTC
awhh, thank you! ;w;

thanks for reading! ♥

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bloochibi August 5 2012, 06:21:43 UTC
ohmygosh albinism *u*
everything about it is fascinating, and then Jongkey fic about it?
jesus take the wheel

Oh lookie there I spotted the Onho~ djkfhkszljdhfkljas

Jonghyun gingerly rubs the sunscreen into his skin, almost a caress. His fingers are short and ugly but they feel so nice against Kibum’s skin-the mix of the body heat on his digits and the coolness of the thick liquid is so soothing.
//bites fingers at the beauty of this

"It's actually really interesting. I think the red eyes and white hair are beautiful, really."

Kibum rolls his eyes. "I'm beautiful regardless."
Oh god Key
//rolls around

He's a bit self-conscious about it...he always has been.
I really like this line. A lot. It's just perfect in the way it shows how Key is with himself and it's just sdjflkjdgjnks

Plus the things Jjong says after ;~;

The only thing that causes Kibum to suspect otherwise is when Jonghyun blurts, “Your lips are really pretty.”THE MORE I READ THIS THE MORE I GET THAT FEELING OF BURYING MY FACE IN A PILLOW AND JUST ( ... )

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bestplace August 6 2012, 01:15:50 UTC
I wish the onho wasn't so small. I should have added them in more OTL

oh wow everything you quoted and all the comments you made akljasfkl; come let me love you you precious little thing ;_;

just thank you so much. your comment made me asfkljlasd <333

thanks for reading. c: ♥

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bloochibi August 11 2012, 04:14:48 UTC
=w=

It's only because I've been secretly stalking you since I made an LJ and recently grew the balls to comment okay

And you're like perfect okay
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and your writing is like perfect
OKAY.

now I'm getting emotional
I'M SORRY I'M LIKE THIS

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bestplace August 11 2012, 14:45:35 UTC
omg stop it

stop stop

I'm blushing okay

/hides >///<

please continue to stalk me omfg aklsfjak;sdf <3

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