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For the Time Being (2/?)

Feb 11, 2012 17:02

Title: For the Time Being (2/?)
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Romance, angst, fluff (and lots of it)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6100
Summary: Kibum slips into a coma. Jonghyun isn't sure what to do.

( “Jonghyun-Jjong, what does love feel like?” )

multichap, fic!fttb, jongkey

Comments 45

mikssi February 12 2012, 00:09:41 UTC

/adding to the 10482394823 spots I already have in your journal.

bestplace February 12 2012, 00:10:26 UTC

lol I don't even have that many posts. XP

just2wings February 12 2012, 00:59:08 UTC

Quick comment because I'm just taking a study break ^^
I'm really wondering what's going to happen with Kibum. Will he be himself again or will he stay like he is, a little (a lot?) different? My guess is he figured out he likes Jjong, or liked, past tense. He's adorable though, but gahhh I hope he gets better T.T
I feel a bit sorry for Jonghyun too, at least things are looking better! It was a bitter sweet but still sweet ending for the chapter ^^

bestplace February 12 2012, 20:04:52 UTC

I'm hoping that I made things look better! Because as time progresses in the story, things are supposed to look a little brighter and more hopeful. c:
Thank you so much for reading. :) ♥

cuethemusicc February 12 2012, 01:14:17 UTC

MINE. MINE. MINE.

cuethemusicc February 12 2012, 02:12:09 UTC

This reminds me, I still have the last chapter of your other fic to read!!
Anyways, I'm on my phone right now, so I might not be able to give you a proper comment D':
The chapter as a whole is really bittersweet. There is so much interaction between Key and Jonghyun that was so adorable and sweet, but there is the fact that Jonghyun doesn't know how much of Key is actually the real him. And the fact that every little thing Key remembers makes Jonghyun so happy, both makes my heart flutter and ache a bit. And lol, at the dino stuffed animal seen. Sooooo cuuuuttttee. I'm not sure what was better, Key when he first woke up, or Key now, who clings onto him, causing inner turmoil (but this key is also incredibly adorable!!)
Anyways, thanks for writing, hope to see more soon!!

bestplace February 12 2012, 20:03:42 UTC

nah, your comment is fine, bb. ^^

It is indeed bittersweet. :'( I get sort of sad writing it...which is why there's so much fluff in the mix OTL

thank you so much for reading. :') ♥

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bestplace February 12 2012, 19:59:43 UTC

Glad you liked it! c:
Thank you for reading. :) ♥

thatrollingstar February 12 2012, 02:50:05 UTC

Oh. My. God.
I love coma fics so much! It's so fluffy and sweet....
I quite enjoy this shy and vulnerable Kibum.

bestplace February 12 2012, 19:59:22 UTC

I quite enjoy him, too. for reasons.
Thank you for reading. :) ♥