FIC: Tawdry/Tawdry'd (Finn/Rachel)

[berry_hearts]

FIC: Tawdry/Tawdry’d: An Exercise in Verbs
Author:berry_hearts 
Disclaimer: I do not own glee and make no profit from this work of fiction
Rating: PG-14ish. Adult Concepts
Prompt: Rachel/Finn; Sequined Legwarmers (he’s got a kink for them via glee_kink_meme)
AN: There is no smut in this fic, sorry anon. i will try to write a smutty-esque sequel
SEQUEL: HERE

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Comments

[berry_hearts]

Thanks for readin Ali!! :)

[anonymous]

Misuse of the word "tawdry". The word has a negative connotation no matter how it is used, so unless Rachel thinks her sexual activity with Finn is negative in some way, wrong word choice.

[berry_hearts]

Thanks for reading anonymous grammar Nazi. It makes you look like an ass, anon.

[anonymous]

And word misuse makes you seem uneducated. I'd much rather be an ass than uneducated, myself, although last time I checked "feedback" included constructive criticism and not just gushing praise.

[berry_hearts]

it's not that you're a grammar nazi (which is not by any means an insult- grammar is important), and I appreciate feedback. I feel that I used the word appropriately according to the American Heritage Dictionary (and feel free to question that since you are from Toronto according to your IP address):

[berry_hearts]

Heehee! I don't think I am that good with smut, lol. I loved the prompt.

[berry_hearts]

Thanks I appreciate the feedback. I want puck/Finn to be BFFs again asap

[anysomething]

this is brilliant. it totally just screams "HI I'M FINN AND THIS IS WHAT I'M ABOUT" (which is a good thing, I promise) and i wish i could characterize that well. was intrigued by the leg warmers. that's awesome. i wonder if we'll be seeing more leg warmers in april.

also, love Hannah RIley and that, now it's summer, Finn plays video games with Artie. that pretty much won me over.

[berry_hearts]

Wow thanks I am super flattered you wrote that!! :) let me know if you want to be on my fic preview filter :)