Comments | beren_writes: Fic: MMOM04 - When You're Not There, Jrock RPS, Gackt/Hyde, NC17/18

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Fic: MMOM04 - When You're Not There, Jrock RPS, Gackt/Hyde, NC17/18

May 04, 2009 09:44

Title: MMOM04 - When You're Not There
Author: Beren
Fandom: Jrock RPS
Pairing: Gackt/Hyde
Rating: NC17/18
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, the real people in it are used without their permission and I definitely don't own them or have any copyright to any part of any of them. I do not believe any of this happened, is likely to happen or ( Read more... )

rating: r to nc17, category: slash, fandom: jrock, person: hyde, fictype: 01-3kwds, person: gackt, ficfest: mmom, pairing: jr - gackt/hyde

Comments 11

mieka_writes May 4 2009, 14:04:58 UTC

whoa....

heh.. Hyde is a tempting little sweety isn't he?

beren_writes May 4 2009, 20:32:09 UTC

Oh yes, very definitely :) Thanks for commenting.

j_choiseul May 4 2009, 15:21:35 UTC

That was so...what's the word?

That was very strong. I always like vampire!Gackt fics. I know it's a bogus claim, and yet there's always this part of me that just hopes, you know?

I especially like Gackt's fetish with teh blanket. How you portray his obsession is fantastic. It was so...human of him to feel himself getting attached to Hyde, and yet he didn't pull himself away. He fell even harder.

When Hyde comes in and sees his lover, I loved that part , too. I think everybody's had that dream where they could've sworn it was real, and then the next day some little thing happens that connects real life to the dream, and you just wonder. I like how you captured that aspect.

I wish you'd gone into a bit more detail of how Gackt's vampire form differed from his human form. Actual physical descriptions, you know?

Also, I think you left one of your beta's notes in this version:
He drank from willing donors in the clubs in the darker parts of town to stay alive and he had never allowed himself to taste Hyde after that first night, ( ... )

beren_writes May 4 2009, 20:34:36 UTC

Thank you so much, and thanks for the heads up about the note. I have corrected the problem - funny how one letter can screw a whole sentence - LOL.

I love vampire!Gackt too, but then I love vampire!anything :). I adore vampire fic and films and books - vamps are my big weakness. I found Gackt and Hyde through Moon Child all because of the vampire angle ::g::.

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beren_writes May 4 2009, 20:35:13 UTC

Thank you so much :)

real_deathangel May 4 2009, 19:48:29 UTC

Wow....

That was just amazing. Hyde must have enjoyed what he saw.
Great job! Can we expect more awesome fanfiction from you soon??

beren_writes May 4 2009, 20:36:32 UTC

Thank you :)
I'm sure he did ... I know I would have ;)
Well I have no more Jrock planned for May yet, but I haven't finished planning all the fics for mmom, so you never can tell :D

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beren_writes May 6 2009, 08:54:43 UTC

Thank you ... of course he was going to get caught, what's the point in Gackt being a vamp if he can't get his fangs into Hyde? ;)