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ninamalfoy November 17 2005, 11:08:14 UTC
Ooooh. I so heart Xabi now. Don't just rip it off, burn it!! :-)

Aw, I loved the introspection; the whole 'Trubel' around a soccer player and how it becomes a part of your life, but you'll never really get used to it. Mwah.

And, aw. I would so have loved to see the hug, bet Milan was doing some humping there as well *winks*, and shy-but-devious!Xabi is so adorable.

Beautiful snippet; love it! Will there be a follow-up? *leers*

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benitle November 17 2005, 11:15:30 UTC
Awww, thank you, thank you!

Xabi is a sweet, little angel. I love him. I think, he and Mills would be so very flirty together and making little hints all the time. And that hug was a very lovely hug. Very close. Tanja and I squeed quite a bit. ;)

And yes, the Trubel. It's probably very hard for them, all the pressure and stuff.

Yes, there might be a follow-up. *nods*

Thanks again for reading!

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cerulean_eyes November 17 2005, 11:44:21 UTC
Awww, that's so lovely! :)

Whereas, in fact, all you want to is go home, sit down and have a rest. -I thought this was very fitting and believable. :) Good observation, really.

*adores you*

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benitle November 17 2005, 12:03:42 UTC
Thank you, dear! Glad you liked!

I guess poor players are annoyed with the fans from time to time, especially if you just lost. But Mills has something better to come, hasn't he?

Thank you again.

*adores also*

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cerulean_eyes November 17 2005, 13:01:38 UTC
your icon is guh.

*squish*

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benitle November 17 2005, 13:20:51 UTC
Heee, I have a slight kink for knees, yes. Especially Milan's and Xabi's knees. ;)

*squishes also*

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winter_solstice November 17 2005, 12:31:45 UTC
i like the image of Xabi ripping clothes off of anyone Mills.

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benitle November 17 2005, 13:05:31 UTC
Yes, that is a very good thing, indeed. *licks them both*

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winter_solstice November 17 2005, 13:08:18 UTC
maybe he can growl while doing it too! *fans self*

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benitle November 17 2005, 14:21:58 UTC
Xabi has to growl a little while ripping off the jacket of Doom from Slutboy's body. Has to be that way.

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lalita82 November 17 2005, 14:46:48 UTC
That is just lovely fic, dear!

*hearts you*

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benitle November 17 2005, 14:54:40 UTC
Gracias! ^_^

Glad you liked it, love!

*hearts too*

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kels450 November 17 2005, 14:51:17 UTC
Aww, that was excellent :D

The last line had me giggling, bless ;)

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benitle November 17 2005, 14:57:39 UTC
Thanks very much! ^_^

Glad you enjoyed the little silliness. I don't know whether you've ever seen the coat of the D00m, but rest assured that it is truly hideous! It needs to be ripped off and burnt.

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kels450 November 17 2005, 15:14:22 UTC
heehee, if it's the one I'm thinking of, I saw it on match of the day a few weeks ago - and it really is bad!! ;)

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benitle November 17 2005, 15:22:36 UTC
See, the sad thing is that Milan has at least 5 different coats that classify as hideous. The white one, the lime green one, the brown one and I wouldn't be amazed if he had a pink jacket. Anyway, was talking about this one:


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