Comments | benitle_writes: Fic - Pirates

benitle_writes

Fic - Pirates - AU!

Sep 26, 2005 14:15

Title: Pirates (duh! I know, lame title)

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-warning: multi-chaptered, -warning: au, -genre: slash, xabi alonso, -rating: nc-17, luis garcía, -warning: wip, -fandom: footballslash, john arne riise, steven gerrard, -word count: 2501 - 5000, jamie carragher, sami hyypiä

Comments 67

ergo_sum14 September 26 2005, 13:08:19 UTC

ARGH!

Ahoy there matey!

Swab the decks!

benitle September 26 2005, 13:18:25 UTC

*laughs*

Ay-ay Captain!

*grabs mop and murmurs*

ergo_sum14 September 26 2005, 13:47:21 UTC

Pirates rock. And so does pirate sex.

benitle September 26 2005, 14:06:23 UTC

Definitely. Hot, strong men, covered in tattoos, sweating from all the hard work, not having had sex for weeks and then. *roar*

Yeah, baby, yeah!

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unitedforever September 26 2005, 13:16:33 UTC

Oh brilliant! I love a bit of AU and this is definitely an interesting theme. Very hot smut too.

*thumbs up*

benitle September 26 2005, 13:21:11 UTC

Heh, thank you, dear! :) I was a bit nervous because I never wrote AU before, so. I usually don't even read AU. Btw, how's your WW AU going?

So, yes, glad you liked it!

unitedforever September 26 2005, 13:54:28 UTC

I wrote a little bit more last week while at work, but that hasn't been typed up yet. I still have a bit to do on the next part, though and I don't know when I'll have time. :S

I think AU can sometimes be a bit tricky, depending on the theme and how you write it. But this is definitely a good one. *g*

benitle September 26 2005, 14:08:53 UTC

Oh, I see. Good luck with it. :D

What I found hard was keeping the characters in mind. Even though it's an AU you somehow want to keep the characterization. Well, never mind! I'm glad it turned out well and you liked it.

winter_solstice September 26 2005, 14:06:56 UTC

well that was fun! ;)

benitle September 26 2005, 14:09:34 UTC

Carra'd make a brilliant one-eyed pirate, I think. :D

Glad you liked it.

winter_solstice September 26 2005, 14:14:57 UTC

one-eyed pirate!Carra is hot...even with just the bit part...yes, hot! :D

benitle September 26 2005, 14:19:46 UTC

I guess, he'd be the second Captain (and the real Captain when Captain Clueless is once more more Clueless than Captain). Plus, Carra'd look great in pirate's clothes. Yes. :D

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veiledxposure September 26 2005, 14:18:36 UTC

Yay! It was absolutely fantastic and hot. :D
*adds to memories*

benitle September 26 2005, 14:24:05 UTC

Yay!! Glad you liked it, my love!

There is something about hot, sweaty pirates. Strong men without fear. *lusts* I want my own pirate now.

veiledxposure September 26 2005, 14:36:42 UTC

Hahaha, you took the words right out of my mouth! ♥
*loves*

benitle September 26 2005, 14:41:24 UTC

Slashy minds think alike! ;)

*loves also*

pink_potato September 26 2005, 14:19:00 UTC

Heee! *grins* That was very fun and hot. I am very amused by Pirate!Luis. More?

benitle September 26 2005, 14:25:46 UTC

Luis would probably stand on the plank himself every other week because he annoys the other pirates so much that they threaten him this way. ;)

Glad you liked it, love. :D Not sure if I can manage to write more, but I shall keep it in mind as an option.

pink_potato September 26 2005, 14:32:10 UTC

Hehe. I'm sure he'd be pretty good at persuading them to let him stay on board though! *g*

No pressure! It's just a nice universe you've greated here :)

benitle September 26 2005, 14:39:35 UTC

Most definitely. As soon as he's out there on the plank and comes up with the Puppy eyes, he'll change their minds. They'd never throw him overboard!

I shall see if I can come up with something. I had a good laugh writing it.