Title: Beneath These Skies
Rating: R
Wordcount: 6k this part, 37k overall
Betas:
vyctori and
seijichanDisclaimer: Do not own.
Summary: An ex-soldier-turned-healer, a priest, and an unhorsed knight flee for their lives after the invasion of their homeland. John didn't expect the road to safety to be easy, but the addition of a petite mage and a scowling former prisoner
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And, I wish you the best of lucking trying to get the intricacies of Tellius' culture across. :D
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There's been a good amount of fun with culture warping/including, and I'm curious to see what a reader such as yourself will get out of this fic that a non-FE fan won't. Unit classes, abilities, weapons, so on. I know I'm cheating, putting Molly the shaman into PoR, but hey. (I went a little hardcore in that I even assigned everyone an elemental affinity. Giving John and Sherlock three pivotal conversations, though... Yeah, a few more than that. John currently has C supports with Mike and Bill. Bill is thunder, Mike is water, John is fire, Sherlock is heaven, Molly is dark.)
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Lovely writing as always. Clicked as soon as I saw you posted something. Can't wait for more! Sherlock seems like a tragic character in this.
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Thanks!
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I love how unimpressed John is by Sherlock's deductions, because he assumes that it's just magic. I imagine that infuriates Sherlock. Looking forward to reading more!
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In a world of science, Sherlock's abilities befuddle. In a world of magic, they make perfect sense. Too ironic to resist. Thanks for reading!
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