Repost, to restart me...

[benchilada]

So, after reading a bit o' fun-nessosity from man_size and digitante (both of whose FUCKING journals you should be FUCKING reading), I felt prompted to repost this, so it'll be fresh in my brain -- hah -- when I get back to work on it later on. It keeps shifting between screenplay format and story format...let me know if you have ideas on how to make up its mind

Comments

[nhyrvana]

Aw man, this is like an appetizer to a bigger meal. More?

-e

[benchilada]

That's what I'm working on, as Serge and Mike and the Moon Turk do a small dance in a tiny room in the back of my brain. But I've also to shit out a Hometown Pantry true story...

[farawaypoints]

Neeeeet. You have my attention.

[benchilada]

Yaaaaay!

Fresh

[digitante]

Very very good. I think this is a fantastic set up. I can see your desire/confusion re: story or screenplay format. I say write it out story-wise first, but aim for the screen. This is a pure sci-fi thriller the likes of which I loooove.

Re: Fresh

[benchilada]

You know, I think that's how I'm going to do it. I just got a copy of the Final Draft program, so after a few more pages, I should see how many minutes this bastard would end up being.

I also enjoy the "bad guy" for this story...

[isisjinha]

Very good.
Just I don't like to read a part. I want entire one of what I want.
I always was very demanding person. HA!

[benchilada]

You'll get more soon, I promise...

Jeez, you ARE demanding...

[isisjinha]

Wondering if you can say the same thing facing to my great smile...
Ha!

[benchilada]

I could say anything facing your great smile, you enormous lunatic!

[tim_x]

I am SO glad that I waited until part 2 was done before reading this.

Good show!

[benchilada]

I'm glad you enjoyed 'em, both of 'em!

[benchilada]

I mean, assuming you liked the second one...

Script vs. novel

[sara_frankie]

If you changed it from a novel format to a script, would Dan have extended voice overs? If it was a voice over, it wouldn't need to be so descriptive... Just a thought. Love the story so far - the Hardline in the flesh :)