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beldarzfixon

Suffer the Children

Apr 30, 2012 13:48

( So many of these souls are born into a human cesspool - some quite literally )

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dblicher April 30 2012, 19:03:54 UTC

I laughed aloud when I started reading this! I adore it. Yeah, so I've been raising my kids and keeping my blog for more than five years, but did anything so cool ever occur to me? NO-O-O-O! Way to go. And with such time constraints as you had, too! I am SO impressed. As always.

beldarzfixon April 30 2012, 23:52:48 UTC

I'm sure I wasn't the only one thinking "Really, Gary, CESSPOOL?!" And then to link it with a nonfiction entry... I'm so pleasantly surprised at my brain coming up with this. Looking over your source material was very inspiring and I hope I did your story justice. Best of luck to you and your brood as you go forth, and thanks again.

similiesslip April 30 2012, 22:37:48 UTC

It would be hard to have the job to send babies off. I like the idea of those who suffer "getting another shot."

This was a very creative use of the prompt!:)

beldarzfixon April 30 2012, 23:56:14 UTC

Thanks! I like to think that all things are possible, and I'm told there are some who believe that reincarnation is not incompatible with Judeo-Christian belief.

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beldarzfixon May 1 2012, 02:14:16 UTC

I couldn't resist. Being from Arkansas, I feel it apt to embarrass them back. =D

pixiebelle May 1 2012, 18:20:55 UTC

That line was genius! It made me snort with laughter as well. Well done!

alien_infinity May 1 2012, 00:49:42 UTC

This was a cool story! :)

beldarzfixon May 1 2012, 02:15:54 UTC

Thanks!

lawchicky May 1 2012, 01:43:52 UTC

Loved this! It reminded me of a couple of pieces I wrote last season.

beldarzfixon May 1 2012, 02:17:19 UTC

Thanks!