I just realised how depressing this fic is. I mean, given the canons it was hardly going to be kittens and rainbows, but still. IT IS DONE. \o/ Thanks to everyone for reading, and for putting up with the longer-than-expected gaps. It's been so interesting hearing how the story runs from the outside. Many thanks also, again, to my marvellous co-
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/hijacking of J's eljay
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I loved how everything came together into a plan that takes them forward. I loved the relationship between Ruth and Tariq. I absolutely loved - and felt awful about - the nod towards Harry, and what lies ahead for him. Jo and Lucas smoking together! Malcolm and Tariq getting on so well! Jo's anger at Zaf, because she couldn't possibly take in more despair! Tom Quinn never being able to come back!
This whole world, you've constructed it so thoroughly. The section with the people in the marketplace was horrible; Ruth running out to Tom was wry and sad; Harry sitting on the floor by Nikki's bed where she'd chosen to go with some semblance of dignity was poignant.
Ahhhh, so good. I love coming to the end of something and feeling that good, solid weight in my gut, knowing that it was well-told. Excellent, excellent job, girls. This was brilliant, and well worth the wait.
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I can't believe it's actually done! Now I will finally be able to concentrate on my ficathonfic, I hope. And catch up with reading other people's fic!
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:-)
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Thank you as always for your kind comments, they mean a lot. :D
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(The first scene she sent me, dear readers, was half of that one where Jo kisses Harry and doesn't smoke her cigarette. And then we were all how did they get there? Where are they going? And then we got a bit carried away)
I had such a lot of fun - really as a last fanfiction hurrah it was a pretty great one. And thanks for doing all the hard work, posting and so on whilst I have had my feet up over here...! Soph
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(And now look at it! *marvels*)
I'm glad you got a last hurrah, as it were, rather than most people who leave fandom by drifting away, feeling guilty and never coming back. I'll make sure to have a last hurrah sometime in the distant future when it happens to me!
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